After more than three months, I finally finished writing, so let me take a breath.
First of all, I would like to thank all the readers for their support. Many book friends gave Sun a lot of inspiration in the comments. Without you joining, I am afraid that this book will lose a lot of color. Thank you everyone.
Next, let’s give an answer to the topics that everyone is more concerned about.
First of all, regarding the title "Moon Shadow and Frost", everyone speculated that it refers to the four heroines in the book. This statement is correct or not.
At the beginning, my plan was only two heroines, Yue'er and Su Ningshuang. The full text was about twenty to thirty chapters, and the title actually refers to these two people.
Later, everyone was so enthusiastic and commented positively. After finishing writing the two heroines, I felt that some things had not been finished, so I added two more.
Judging from the effect, everyone also likes the two heroines behind him very much, and Sun is very pleased.
If you insist on matching one by one, the moon naturally refers to the moon, the frost refers to the master's wife, but the shadow is not like Lu Wanying, but Han Shiyun, and Hua refers to Lu Wanying.The specific reason will be explained later.
This article is called martial arts, but it is actually not very accurate. There are not many scenes in the world, but more of a short story about four women in a mansion.
Because the two heroines in the beginning set up did not have martial arts skills, if there were too many dramas in the martial arts world, they might become supporting roles. After all, the title is Yueying Shuanghua, not Li Tianlin's record of picking up girls. The focus is deviated, but instead it is inappropriate and goes astray.
Similarly, there were some interesting plots, such as Han Shiyun's master went down the mountain to find a disciple and became a relationship with Li Tianlin, Li Zhenniang seduced Li Tianlin, etc., Lu Wanying and a little sister, etc., but because she was too far from the topic, she did not write it down. Although it was a bit regretful, she did not write it down for the sake of the overall structure.
The story has developed to this day, and the four beauties are in love and living in harmony. All the things that should be explained are clearly explained. If you don’t want to repeat the previous plot in the following plot, you can only expand the scene to the entire world and add new characters. However, the same sentence is still the case, so the scene between Shuang and Yue will be too light, so you have to not write it.
Many people hope that there will be a green scene in the article. I am really sorry. Sun is not biased against the green article, but the tone of this article is to take the warm and tender route, so there is no green element on purpose. Of course, in order to cater to everyone's needs, I played a few edge balls in the middle, and there was nothing I could do if everyone was not satisfied. Maybe the green element will be added to the next work, but I think it won't be many.
No matter what kind of text it is, what attracts readers?
I always think that it is a story and a character. If both are done well, it can satisfy readers. Many shoddy articles do not have good stories or attractive characters. They can’t actually make readers buy it by relying on the whole erotic description.
Without talent, I know that the story is not outstanding, so I have to put some effort into the characters.
What kind of person is Li Tianlin?
He is not a hero, but an ordinary person, with all the weaknesses of ordinary people: he is weak in character, lustful, a little courageous, weak will, and unable to withstand temptation, but he occasionally shows a manly side and is considered a good person in the model sense.
He has no particularly outstanding features. He is almost a supporting role model but sits in the protagonist's position. But I still think that this character is actually more suitable as the protagonist of this article than those heroes. After all, the tone of this article is warm and harmonious, rather than a martial arts world competition.
Some readers said that he was just a needle that was used to run the story, and I thought it made sense.
Han Jianchen, in fact, I wrote him as the protagonist of the shadow in this article.
This character who died after two chapters is the beginning of the story and is also the core relevance point of all the characters in the whole text. All characters and all plots are related to him.
He is not only handsome and elegant, but also a wise man. He is fashionable when he dies and can leave a last word to deal with his life. He allows Su Ningshuang to remarry, promise Li Tianlin and urges him and Yue'er to get married early. On the surface, it is for the sake of his wife's decades later, but in fact it is not necessarily to prevent the story in the main text from happening later.
Perhaps he had already figured out that once he died, the lady who looked dignified and elegant on the outside and was passionate on the inside could not keep her lonely, but her disciple was the man closest to her who would not be wary of the least. Her two fates were to prevent any inconsistency between the two.
Unfortunately, man's calculations are not as good as God's calculations, and what should happen cannot be avoided.
Even after his death, his shadow has been shrouded in the sky above the Han Mansion. Li Tianlin is the shadow of Han Jianchen in the hearts of many people. It can even be said that Li Tianlin may not have such thoughts in his subconscious mind.
As the leading female lead, Su Ningshuang looks dignified and elegant, virtuous, but her heart is as hot as fire.
When her husband dies, she may swear to keep her rituals because of her temporary grief, but she can't actually keep it.
If Li Tianlin was not around him, who was close and unprepared, he might be able to keep his body as good as a jade in a few years, but by some accidents, the two finally had a relationship.
On the surface, it seemed that Li Tianlin took the initiative to attack and Su Ningshuang passedably accepted it, but in fact, it may not be the result of the two attracting each other. If she really had no desire for Li Tianlin, Li Tianlin would not have succeeded so easily.
Once a beautiful woman in the age of tiger and wolf, she will be free from her body and mind, and the raging fire will ignite, and there will be no means to extinguish it.
Between her and Li Tianlin, love and desire can be said to be mixed together. It is really hard to explain which one is more.
Yue'er is a different situation. Among the four girls, her feelings for Li Tianlin are the most sincere and pure, and her feelings are obviously more than desire.
Just like she said: from the beginning of being sensible, she dreamed of being his bride one day.
For a pure girl who has never experienced the storm, in her heart, her father, mother and husband are the whole world.
When her father died, a corner of the world collapsed. She was sad and felt more of panic and helpless, so the only thing she could do was to lean against the other two pillars: her mother and husband.
This is not only because of family love, but also because it is the whole world she relies on.
So when she found out that her mother and her husband were mixed together, she was so sad and angry that she could only accept it, because these two people were the world. If they really broke up with her husband and mother, the final result would be death.
As for the later, her husband cheated again and again, she was also in pain again and again, but she had no choice but to cut her wounds again and again, and the pain eventually became numb.
Finally, she learned to endure and share her happiness with others, but she was actually unwilling to accept it deep down. She provoked Lu Wanying again and again, stimulated Han Shiyun with words, and even occasionally sarcastic about her mother, it was actually a psychological reaction of unwillingness.
In the end, she had to try to accept all this, and maybe she didn't know the happiness or misfortune she ended up getting.
Han Shiyun is a woman with heavy brother control.
In fact, she can be regarded as a powerful version of Yue'er. The two have the same personalities, simple and infatuated personality. The difference is that one has kept love, even if it is only part of it, the other has not loved it and suffered for ten years.
The simple girl endured the torture of the wind and rain, and eventually grew up, but she could never return to her old days.
She recently chose Li Tianlin as her destination, but in her heart, she regarded him as the substitute for that person. She still loved her so much that she still called him her brother when she was in love.
From a game perspective, Yue'er is the protagonist of the first week, and Han Shiyun is the protagonist of the second week. She has different experiences, but she is still the same person.
Yun'er is the moon, she is the shadow of the moon.
The woman Lu Wanying actually wrote it on purpose with Su Ningshuang.
Su is a lady from a noble family, and Lu is a family of constables; Su Wenjing is gentle, Lu is bold and courageous; Su's words are elegant, and Lu occasionally expresses vulgarity; Su Wenjing is a reckless heart under her appearance, and Lu is a conservative heart under her bold face.
Of course, the two have something in common: they are smart and wise.
Lu Wanying dared to tease Yue'er and ignored Han Shiyun, but always respected Su Ningshuang. The two of them appreciated each other, which ensured the peace of Li Tianlin's harem.
She is the opposite of Su Ningshuang, and she is Shuangzhihua.
Her feelings for Li Tianlin were actually not strong. She just lost her virginity and had to marry him when she was pregnant with his child. It was more of a kind of indulgence in marrying a chicken, marrying a dog, because in his heart, Lu Wanying was a very conservative woman.
Of course, as the two of them were together for a long time, the relationship between them gradually deepened, and eventually she also recognized her feelings for Li Tianlin.
Riwei Xiaobao in the Deer and the Cauldron said: After I die, Shuang'er will definitely commit suicide, and the princess will definitely not commit suicide. The other women may have to throw sieves, and Fang Yi will definitely cheat when throwing sieves and treat me as a sheep.
As for Li Tianlin, if he dies, Yue'er will definitely dress up beautifully and sacrifice her love with a smile. Su Ningshuang is afraid that she will be sad for a while, and then she may be loyal, may become a monk, and may meet other men, but she is not sure.
Han Shiyun will chase the murderer, and after taking revenge, she lives alone and does not see outsiders. Lu Wanying will definitely cut the murderer into pieces. After taking revenge, she will only raise the child calmly. She will not be too sad, but will keep her integrity and not marry, not because she loves her husband deeply, just because this is what a woman should do to her deceased husband.
Okay, after saying so much, I felt a little dizzy myself. Anyway, let's end it like that.
Next, as mentioned before, I will write about the person who could not even say the name thirty years ago, the past of Lu Mingchuan, Guo Shoucheng and others, and the stories of the Shuiyun Sword Sect will be mixed in.
This time it's really martial arts.
When it comes to the world and the court, from the current concept, the pattern is a bit too big, and I don’t know if I can write it well.
Because I am a lazy person, the update will probably slow down and will not be updated so quickly like this article.
Let’s take a look at the following sentences first, and it’s a preview of this work:
Many years later, when Lu Mingchuan received the news of Guo Shoucheng's death, he did not laugh or remember him sadly, but just gave a light oh, as if this was the most common thing.
Only when everyone around him left, Lu Mingchuan sighed, poured a glass of wine, took a sip, and poured the rest on the ground, then lay on the recliner, closed his eyes, and thoughts traveled through thirty years, returning to the energetic youth.
Guo Shoucheng, Zhao Shouzhuo, Leng Kongming, Ding Huafan, at that time we were all young people, drinking and singing wildly in the desert, riding horses on the grassland to kill enemies, wind and snow all over the sky, and the eyes were full of enemies, golden swords and iron horses, just like yesterday.
By the way, there is also that bastard who has the highest martial arts skills, the most ruthless murderer, and the perverted temperament. He can make people angry, but he is loyal to his friends and makes people hate him.
I haven't seen you for thirty years, old friend, are you still alive?
This guy is a complete bastard, he is the most enviable... angry, I mean resentment is that he has nine wives, beast Ah!
My eldest wife turned out to be his master. She is beautiful and has high martial arts skills. Why can't I think of marrying him like a bastard?If I... ahem, I mean, can't anyone else be able to see it?
The second wife is a widow, and by the way, her original husband was still killed by him.
The third wife is a foreigner from the border, with thousands of people under her command, and she is also the one who kills people without blinking.
Fourth wife, hehe, you can’t say it, you can’t say it.
The fifth wife is a female hero. Damn it. The two of them obviously have blood feuds, so why did they run together?
The sixth wife and the seventh wife are twin sisters, a pair of little witches, which makes people feel headache.
Ba’s wife is his apprentice and has been raising her for more than ten years. Her good child has caused him a disaster.
Nine wife is his goddaughter, this beast!By the way, she called his second wife a mother.
Tell me, a bastard who has enjoyed all the blessings of the world and is not scolded by thousands of people, but is also called a great hero by countless people. What kind of world is it?
First of all, I would like to thank all the readers for their support. Many book friends gave Sun a lot of inspiration in the comments. Without you joining, I am afraid that this book will lose a lot of color. Thank you everyone.
Next, let’s give an answer to the topics that everyone is more concerned about.
First of all, regarding the title "Moon Shadow and Frost", everyone speculated that it refers to the four heroines in the book. This statement is correct or not.
At the beginning, my plan was only two heroines, Yue'er and Su Ningshuang. The full text was about twenty to thirty chapters, and the title actually refers to these two people.
Later, everyone was so enthusiastic and commented positively. After finishing writing the two heroines, I felt that some things had not been finished, so I added two more.
Judging from the effect, everyone also likes the two heroines behind him very much, and Sun is very pleased.
If you insist on matching one by one, the moon naturally refers to the moon, the frost refers to the master's wife, but the shadow is not like Lu Wanying, but Han Shiyun, and Hua refers to Lu Wanying.The specific reason will be explained later.
This article is called martial arts, but it is actually not very accurate. There are not many scenes in the world, but more of a short story about four women in a mansion.
Because the two heroines in the beginning set up did not have martial arts skills, if there were too many dramas in the martial arts world, they might become supporting roles. After all, the title is Yueying Shuanghua, not Li Tianlin's record of picking up girls. The focus is deviated, but instead it is inappropriate and goes astray.
Similarly, there were some interesting plots, such as Han Shiyun's master went down the mountain to find a disciple and became a relationship with Li Tianlin, Li Zhenniang seduced Li Tianlin, etc., Lu Wanying and a little sister, etc., but because she was too far from the topic, she did not write it down. Although it was a bit regretful, she did not write it down for the sake of the overall structure.
The story has developed to this day, and the four beauties are in love and living in harmony. All the things that should be explained are clearly explained. If you don’t want to repeat the previous plot in the following plot, you can only expand the scene to the entire world and add new characters. However, the same sentence is still the case, so the scene between Shuang and Yue will be too light, so you have to not write it.
Many people hope that there will be a green scene in the article. I am really sorry. Sun is not biased against the green article, but the tone of this article is to take the warm and tender route, so there is no green element on purpose. Of course, in order to cater to everyone's needs, I played a few edge balls in the middle, and there was nothing I could do if everyone was not satisfied. Maybe the green element will be added to the next work, but I think it won't be many.
No matter what kind of text it is, what attracts readers?
I always think that it is a story and a character. If both are done well, it can satisfy readers. Many shoddy articles do not have good stories or attractive characters. They can’t actually make readers buy it by relying on the whole erotic description.
Without talent, I know that the story is not outstanding, so I have to put some effort into the characters.
What kind of person is Li Tianlin?
He is not a hero, but an ordinary person, with all the weaknesses of ordinary people: he is weak in character, lustful, a little courageous, weak will, and unable to withstand temptation, but he occasionally shows a manly side and is considered a good person in the model sense.
He has no particularly outstanding features. He is almost a supporting role model but sits in the protagonist's position. But I still think that this character is actually more suitable as the protagonist of this article than those heroes. After all, the tone of this article is warm and harmonious, rather than a martial arts world competition.
Some readers said that he was just a needle that was used to run the story, and I thought it made sense.
Han Jianchen, in fact, I wrote him as the protagonist of the shadow in this article.
This character who died after two chapters is the beginning of the story and is also the core relevance point of all the characters in the whole text. All characters and all plots are related to him.
He is not only handsome and elegant, but also a wise man. He is fashionable when he dies and can leave a last word to deal with his life. He allows Su Ningshuang to remarry, promise Li Tianlin and urges him and Yue'er to get married early. On the surface, it is for the sake of his wife's decades later, but in fact it is not necessarily to prevent the story in the main text from happening later.
Perhaps he had already figured out that once he died, the lady who looked dignified and elegant on the outside and was passionate on the inside could not keep her lonely, but her disciple was the man closest to her who would not be wary of the least. Her two fates were to prevent any inconsistency between the two.
Unfortunately, man's calculations are not as good as God's calculations, and what should happen cannot be avoided.
Even after his death, his shadow has been shrouded in the sky above the Han Mansion. Li Tianlin is the shadow of Han Jianchen in the hearts of many people. It can even be said that Li Tianlin may not have such thoughts in his subconscious mind.
As the leading female lead, Su Ningshuang looks dignified and elegant, virtuous, but her heart is as hot as fire.
When her husband dies, she may swear to keep her rituals because of her temporary grief, but she can't actually keep it.
If Li Tianlin was not around him, who was close and unprepared, he might be able to keep his body as good as a jade in a few years, but by some accidents, the two finally had a relationship.
On the surface, it seemed that Li Tianlin took the initiative to attack and Su Ningshuang passedably accepted it, but in fact, it may not be the result of the two attracting each other. If she really had no desire for Li Tianlin, Li Tianlin would not have succeeded so easily.
Once a beautiful woman in the age of tiger and wolf, she will be free from her body and mind, and the raging fire will ignite, and there will be no means to extinguish it.
Between her and Li Tianlin, love and desire can be said to be mixed together. It is really hard to explain which one is more.
Yue'er is a different situation. Among the four girls, her feelings for Li Tianlin are the most sincere and pure, and her feelings are obviously more than desire.
Just like she said: from the beginning of being sensible, she dreamed of being his bride one day.
For a pure girl who has never experienced the storm, in her heart, her father, mother and husband are the whole world.
When her father died, a corner of the world collapsed. She was sad and felt more of panic and helpless, so the only thing she could do was to lean against the other two pillars: her mother and husband.
This is not only because of family love, but also because it is the whole world she relies on.
So when she found out that her mother and her husband were mixed together, she was so sad and angry that she could only accept it, because these two people were the world. If they really broke up with her husband and mother, the final result would be death.
As for the later, her husband cheated again and again, she was also in pain again and again, but she had no choice but to cut her wounds again and again, and the pain eventually became numb.
Finally, she learned to endure and share her happiness with others, but she was actually unwilling to accept it deep down. She provoked Lu Wanying again and again, stimulated Han Shiyun with words, and even occasionally sarcastic about her mother, it was actually a psychological reaction of unwillingness.
In the end, she had to try to accept all this, and maybe she didn't know the happiness or misfortune she ended up getting.
Han Shiyun is a woman with heavy brother control.
In fact, she can be regarded as a powerful version of Yue'er. The two have the same personalities, simple and infatuated personality. The difference is that one has kept love, even if it is only part of it, the other has not loved it and suffered for ten years.
The simple girl endured the torture of the wind and rain, and eventually grew up, but she could never return to her old days.
She recently chose Li Tianlin as her destination, but in her heart, she regarded him as the substitute for that person. She still loved her so much that she still called him her brother when she was in love.
From a game perspective, Yue'er is the protagonist of the first week, and Han Shiyun is the protagonist of the second week. She has different experiences, but she is still the same person.
Yun'er is the moon, she is the shadow of the moon.
The woman Lu Wanying actually wrote it on purpose with Su Ningshuang.
Su is a lady from a noble family, and Lu is a family of constables; Su Wenjing is gentle, Lu is bold and courageous; Su's words are elegant, and Lu occasionally expresses vulgarity; Su Wenjing is a reckless heart under her appearance, and Lu is a conservative heart under her bold face.
Of course, the two have something in common: they are smart and wise.
Lu Wanying dared to tease Yue'er and ignored Han Shiyun, but always respected Su Ningshuang. The two of them appreciated each other, which ensured the peace of Li Tianlin's harem.
She is the opposite of Su Ningshuang, and she is Shuangzhihua.
Her feelings for Li Tianlin were actually not strong. She just lost her virginity and had to marry him when she was pregnant with his child. It was more of a kind of indulgence in marrying a chicken, marrying a dog, because in his heart, Lu Wanying was a very conservative woman.
Of course, as the two of them were together for a long time, the relationship between them gradually deepened, and eventually she also recognized her feelings for Li Tianlin.
Riwei Xiaobao in the Deer and the Cauldron said: After I die, Shuang'er will definitely commit suicide, and the princess will definitely not commit suicide. The other women may have to throw sieves, and Fang Yi will definitely cheat when throwing sieves and treat me as a sheep.
As for Li Tianlin, if he dies, Yue'er will definitely dress up beautifully and sacrifice her love with a smile. Su Ningshuang is afraid that she will be sad for a while, and then she may be loyal, may become a monk, and may meet other men, but she is not sure.
Han Shiyun will chase the murderer, and after taking revenge, she lives alone and does not see outsiders. Lu Wanying will definitely cut the murderer into pieces. After taking revenge, she will only raise the child calmly. She will not be too sad, but will keep her integrity and not marry, not because she loves her husband deeply, just because this is what a woman should do to her deceased husband.
Okay, after saying so much, I felt a little dizzy myself. Anyway, let's end it like that.
Next, as mentioned before, I will write about the person who could not even say the name thirty years ago, the past of Lu Mingchuan, Guo Shoucheng and others, and the stories of the Shuiyun Sword Sect will be mixed in.
This time it's really martial arts.
When it comes to the world and the court, from the current concept, the pattern is a bit too big, and I don’t know if I can write it well.
Because I am a lazy person, the update will probably slow down and will not be updated so quickly like this article.
Let’s take a look at the following sentences first, and it’s a preview of this work:
Many years later, when Lu Mingchuan received the news of Guo Shoucheng's death, he did not laugh or remember him sadly, but just gave a light oh, as if this was the most common thing.
Only when everyone around him left, Lu Mingchuan sighed, poured a glass of wine, took a sip, and poured the rest on the ground, then lay on the recliner, closed his eyes, and thoughts traveled through thirty years, returning to the energetic youth.
Guo Shoucheng, Zhao Shouzhuo, Leng Kongming, Ding Huafan, at that time we were all young people, drinking and singing wildly in the desert, riding horses on the grassland to kill enemies, wind and snow all over the sky, and the eyes were full of enemies, golden swords and iron horses, just like yesterday.
By the way, there is also that bastard who has the highest martial arts skills, the most ruthless murderer, and the perverted temperament. He can make people angry, but he is loyal to his friends and makes people hate him.
I haven't seen you for thirty years, old friend, are you still alive?
This guy is a complete bastard, he is the most enviable... angry, I mean resentment is that he has nine wives, beast Ah!
My eldest wife turned out to be his master. She is beautiful and has high martial arts skills. Why can't I think of marrying him like a bastard?If I... ahem, I mean, can't anyone else be able to see it?
The second wife is a widow, and by the way, her original husband was still killed by him.
The third wife is a foreigner from the border, with thousands of people under her command, and she is also the one who kills people without blinking.
Fourth wife, hehe, you can’t say it, you can’t say it.
The fifth wife is a female hero. Damn it. The two of them obviously have blood feuds, so why did they run together?
The sixth wife and the seventh wife are twin sisters, a pair of little witches, which makes people feel headache.
Ba’s wife is his apprentice and has been raising her for more than ten years. Her good child has caused him a disaster.
Nine wife is his goddaughter, this beast!By the way, she called his second wife a mother.
Tell me, a bastard who has enjoyed all the blessings of the world and is not scolded by thousands of people, but is also called a great hero by countless people. What kind of world is it?