Looking at the comic drawings of Shiina Ma's white hair, Hasegawa suddenly had the urge to make a fuss, but he was stuck again
Shiina Mashira's manga paintings are so exquisite, no different from what was passed on to Hasegawa before. They are all the same as those that can be taken out as covers or even posters.
However, what makes Hasegawa want to vomit blood is that these comic drawings are very exquisite, but they cannot be connected at all. The plot cannot be connected at all, and they cannot be said to be unable to connect. If you have read a light novel, you can connect them according to the plot you have seen. However, if you have not read the original work, you will definitely feel inexplicable when you read this drawing.
It's obviously a completed plot, but Shiina Mashiro doesn't seem to know how to connect the plot at all, and doesn't know how to make the plot seem more coherent. No, it should be said to be coherent.
At this time, Hasegawa suddenly thought that Machida Yuanko had told him before that Shiina Mashiro was a weak point in the plot, even a little weaker than Eriri. Now it seems that starting and ending are a little weaker, and it is obviously a bit weaker.
Shiina, there is something about the original manuscripts you gave me that are not qualified! Although Hasegawa wants to be more gentle, but thinking about Shiina Mashi's stupid personality, I'm afraid that you and her will not understand it at all, so Hasegawa said it was not qualified.
Unqualified? Shiina Mashiba came over with a question mark
That's right, although Mr. Shizuna, your painting skills are very good, and every painting is enough to be used as a cover or even a poster, in addition to painting skills, if you want to become a cartoonist, you also need to control the plot and grasp the rhythm of a story. First of all, you must have enough fluency so that you can build a story. Mr. Shizuna, your control of the story seems a bit weak, so the drawings you gave me are not qualified.
I understand I'll draw it again
Shiina Mashiro's answer was very calm. Hasegawa said it was not qualified, so she started to re-paint, not considering whether Hasegawa was making things difficult for her, or because she was a well-known painter, she didn't want to be pointed at by others.
Shiina Mashira didn't think about these things at all. She just saw that Hasegawa was not qualified, so she went to draw again
I have to say that Shiina Mashiro really listens simply and has no other minds at all
Hasegawa was relieved to see Shiina Mashi's reply. At least Shiina Mashi did not make a fuss with him because of this. This was what Hasegawa was happy to see. After all, no matter Shiina Mashi's own strength, at least her attitude was fine.
No, Shizuna Mahara's painting speed is really fast, and it didn't take long. Shizuna Mahara sent a few drawings again, and the quality of these drawings did not drop at all, all of which were enough to become covers or even posters. This exquisite picture did not have any regression in the slightest time.
Not to mention the others, Hasegawa is very satisfied with this alone
But when Hasegawa moved his eyes from the exquisite picture to the plot, he couldn't help but turn dark again
In terms of the plot, Hasegawa cannot see any progress from the last time, and there is no progress at all. Many plots seem a bit inexplicable.
Even though Shiina Mashiro has a Tokyo Ghoul original light novel as a comparison, why does it still become like this when drawing comics?
After hesitating for a moment, Hasegawa decisively texted Shiina Mabaya again, saying that it was unqualified and needed to re-draw it.
Once again, Hasegawa said that it was not qualified and needed to be repainted. Shiina Mashiro's answer was very simple
good!
That's that simple, a simple word
There is no hindrance at all, and there is no slight reluctance to see
After a while, Shiina Mashiro sent Hasegawa a few drafts again
The paintings of the poster that are still extremely exquisite, but this time Hasegawa just glanced at them quickly and then focused on the plot again
Failed!
Hasegawa directly gave Shiina Ma's three words
To be honest, he denied Shiina Mahara's drawings three times, especially Shiina Mahara's paintings were still so serious. Even if Hasegawa didn't think he had any selfish intentions, it was all caused by Shiina Mahara himself. However, when he denies them three times in a row, Hasegawa felt a little embarrassed when he said Shiina Mahara was unqualified again.
OK I will repaint it!
Shiina Mashiro simply responded to Hasegawa
No rise or tantrum, a simple sentence
Looking at Shiina Mashi's answer, Hasegawa almost felt Shiina Mashi's serious attitude even through the communication software.
Otherwise, let's do it, Shiina Mashira, come to me, I'll tell you how to draw it. Hasegawa gave Shiina Mashira's hair this message and went over with Shiina Mashira's hair.
But after Hasegawa sent this message, he immediately realized that Shiina Mahara is a beautiful girl, a young and weak girl who is powerless, and lets people come to their home. This behavior is a bit too much, especially since he and Shiina Mahara only met once, and even the chats online were limited to comics.
So Hasegawa immediately wanted to send a message to Shiina Mahara again, explaining that he had no other ideas. He could contact Shiina Mahara online and tell her how to draw it. He didn't need Shiina Mahara to come to him.
However, before Hasegawa's text message was edited, Shiina Mashiro had already sent a message
good!
It was still a simple word. Looking at Shiina Mashi's answer, Hasegawa scratched his head a little troubledly. Why did Shiina Mashi agree so readily?
address!
Looking at the text message sent by Shiina Mashiba again, Hasegawa hesitated for a while and edited it: Shiina, we can communicate online, I will tell you how to draw it online.
No, the network is inconvenient to address!
Seeing that Shiina Mashiro was like this, Hasegawa felt embarrassed to continue saying something
I can only send the address I live in.
But after waiting for a while, Hasegawa didn't see Shiina Mashiro's return
This made Hasegawa a little strange
Just say it, it is indeed not very right for a girl to go to a man's house rashly
But Shiina Mahara's attitude seemed very firm before, so he shouldn't consider these things. At this time, it should have arrived, but Shiina Mahara has never arrived yet
Could it be that she is not here? Hasegawa was relieved when he thought about this. After all, Hasegawa really felt that a girl Shiina Mahara was really unqualified to come to her home.
But at this time, Hasegawa's cell phone ringing
Picking up the phone and seeing it was Shiina Mashiro
Hasegawa thought it was Shiina Mashiba who said that he would not come to Hasegawa's house, so he called Hasegawa to explain.
So Hasegawa didn't care much, so he answered the phone directly
Hasegawa, I'm lost
Ah? Hasegawa was stunned when he heard Shiina Mashiro's words: You are lost?
Yes, I'm lost, please pick me up
This, okay, where are you now? I'll pick you up
have no idea
Then look, are there any iconic things around?
I stood under a piece of white clouds, and the shape of the white clouds looked like an annual ring cake
... Hasegawa almost choked to death by Shiina Mashi's words: What about this? Is there anything else? For example, buildings, stores or other things? Hasegawa's tone was a little helpless.
There is a cake shop here to buy annual ring cakes
...It's the annual ring cake again, so what's the name of that cake shop?
Sago Cake Shop
OK, you're waiting for me there, I'll go find you
Hasegawa clicked on the map and tried to find the sago cake shop that Shiina Mashiro mentioned on the map
But when Hasegawa searched, he found that there seemed to be several stores called Saimi Cake Shop in Tokyo.
However, Hasegawa found a cake shop closest to Shiina Mashi. No, it is the closest cake shop in Chishichi Chiba's house. This cake shop is still in the middle of Chishichi Chiba's house and Hasegawa's house. Shiina Mashihara would have to pass by if he came to his own house.
So Hasegawa didn't think much about it and rushed over to the cake shop.
But after Hasegawa rushed over, Shiina Mashiro was not found around this cake shop.
Hasegawa even asked people around him specifically, and they seemed to have never seen Shiina Mashiro before.
This made Hasegawa quite helpless. He called Shiina Mashiro and then confirmed that she was still in place and did not leave. Hasegawa then confirmed that Shiina Mashiro was not here.
A little headache, since that's the case, Hasegawa rushed to another cake shop
But another cake shop is not close to Hasegawa's house and Chihishi's house. Generally speaking, people shouldn't take that road at all, but thinking about Shiina Mashiro said that he was already lost.
Then it is normal to go to other roads when you get lost
But Hasegawa didn't expect that after he rushed over, he still couldn't find Shiina Mashiro
So Hasegawa had to look for cake shops one by one
Finally, Hasegawa found Shiina Mashiraki in the exact opposite direction from Chishi Chiba's family and his own family.
This made Hasegawa feel very speechless. He walked through the direction as soon as he went out, right?
When Hasegawa found Shiina Mashi, he saw Shiina Mashi squatting in front of the large glass window outside the cake shop, staring at the annual ring cake inside without blinking
Looking at Shiina Mashiro's appearance, Hasegawa, who had originally planned to say something, was unable to say anything in the end.
Shiina, I'm here. Hasegawa stood behind Shiina Mashiro and spoke.
Hasegawa, I'm hungry. Shiina Mabashi raised his head, and a hint of silly eyes revealed a hint of camaraderie, just like a kitten eager to feed the raised one.
Hungry? Hasegawa looked at the current time. Indeed, it has been a long time since Shiina Mashiro went out, and it is almost time for supper. Shiina Mashiro felt hungry.
Let's find a restaurant nearby to have dinner first. Hasegawa said to Shiina Mashiro
No, I want to eat the annual ring cake. Shiina Mashiro said, while pointing out his fingers on the glass of the window. She pointed at the direction she was putting the annual ring cake.
Want to eat the annual ring cake? OK, wait a moment, I'll buy it now. Hasegawa said that, and at the same time he couldn't help but shake his head
Facing Shiina Mashi's small request, Hasegawa couldn't think of rejecting it.
After buying the annual ring cake, Shiina Mashiro started to eat it with the annual ring cake, piece after piece, really, I was ready to eat enough to be full.
Shiina Mashiro looked at Hasegawa and paused for a moment, then raised the annual ring cake in his hand: Hasegawa, do you want to eat annual ring cake too?
No, you eat it yourself, I'm not very hungry yet. Hasegawa waved his hand, and the annual ring cake was regarded as a treasure by Shiina Mashiro
Hasegawa does not have that kind of idea of winning the favor, and Hasegawa does not have any special preference for annual ring cakes. Whether to eat or not is nothing to him.
Teacher Shiina, it's getting late now, otherwise I'll send you home
No Shiina Mashiro shook her head
Hum? Is there any other place for Mr. Shiina to go?
Go to Hasegawa's home to draw comics. Shiina Mashiro answered seriously
Teacher Shiina, it's getting late now and it's almost dark. It's not appropriate to go to my house at this time. Wait until tomorrow, and go to my house tomorrow. Hasegawa said to Shiina Mashiro
Shiina Mashiro shook her head: No, because I want to draw a comic
Otherwise, I will go to your house and I will go with you. I will tell you how I will leave after painting. Hasegawa thinks this idea is good.
Don't go to Hasegawa's house tomorrow. If Hasegawa doesn't take me there, I will get lost. Shiina Mashiro shook her head and said stubbornly
... Then I will pick you up tomorrow
No, this will be very troublesome and it will make you very troublesome. Shiina Masashi still shook her head
Looking at Shiina Mashi, Hasegawa couldn't smile bitterly. At the same time, Hasegawa also had a little more appreciation for Shiina Mashi.
Although Shizuna Masashi's personality has certain defects, Shizuna Masashi's head doesn't seem to be very smart.
But Shiina Mashiro is also very good at thinking about others, and the serious attitude he was when drawing comics
Hasegawa suddenly discovered that although Shiina Mashiro was a little simpler, his personality was really good, or very excellent.
Shiina Mashira's manga paintings are so exquisite, no different from what was passed on to Hasegawa before. They are all the same as those that can be taken out as covers or even posters.
However, what makes Hasegawa want to vomit blood is that these comic drawings are very exquisite, but they cannot be connected at all. The plot cannot be connected at all, and they cannot be said to be unable to connect. If you have read a light novel, you can connect them according to the plot you have seen. However, if you have not read the original work, you will definitely feel inexplicable when you read this drawing.
It's obviously a completed plot, but Shiina Mashiro doesn't seem to know how to connect the plot at all, and doesn't know how to make the plot seem more coherent. No, it should be said to be coherent.
At this time, Hasegawa suddenly thought that Machida Yuanko had told him before that Shiina Mashiro was a weak point in the plot, even a little weaker than Eriri. Now it seems that starting and ending are a little weaker, and it is obviously a bit weaker.
Shiina, there is something about the original manuscripts you gave me that are not qualified! Although Hasegawa wants to be more gentle, but thinking about Shiina Mashi's stupid personality, I'm afraid that you and her will not understand it at all, so Hasegawa said it was not qualified.
Unqualified? Shiina Mashiba came over with a question mark
That's right, although Mr. Shizuna, your painting skills are very good, and every painting is enough to be used as a cover or even a poster, in addition to painting skills, if you want to become a cartoonist, you also need to control the plot and grasp the rhythm of a story. First of all, you must have enough fluency so that you can build a story. Mr. Shizuna, your control of the story seems a bit weak, so the drawings you gave me are not qualified.
I understand I'll draw it again
Shiina Mashiro's answer was very calm. Hasegawa said it was not qualified, so she started to re-paint, not considering whether Hasegawa was making things difficult for her, or because she was a well-known painter, she didn't want to be pointed at by others.
Shiina Mashira didn't think about these things at all. She just saw that Hasegawa was not qualified, so she went to draw again
I have to say that Shiina Mashiro really listens simply and has no other minds at all
Hasegawa was relieved to see Shiina Mashi's reply. At least Shiina Mashi did not make a fuss with him because of this. This was what Hasegawa was happy to see. After all, no matter Shiina Mashi's own strength, at least her attitude was fine.
No, Shizuna Mahara's painting speed is really fast, and it didn't take long. Shizuna Mahara sent a few drawings again, and the quality of these drawings did not drop at all, all of which were enough to become covers or even posters. This exquisite picture did not have any regression in the slightest time.
Not to mention the others, Hasegawa is very satisfied with this alone
But when Hasegawa moved his eyes from the exquisite picture to the plot, he couldn't help but turn dark again
In terms of the plot, Hasegawa cannot see any progress from the last time, and there is no progress at all. Many plots seem a bit inexplicable.
Even though Shiina Mashiro has a Tokyo Ghoul original light novel as a comparison, why does it still become like this when drawing comics?
After hesitating for a moment, Hasegawa decisively texted Shiina Mabaya again, saying that it was unqualified and needed to re-draw it.
Once again, Hasegawa said that it was not qualified and needed to be repainted. Shiina Mashiro's answer was very simple
good!
That's that simple, a simple word
There is no hindrance at all, and there is no slight reluctance to see
After a while, Shiina Mashiro sent Hasegawa a few drafts again
The paintings of the poster that are still extremely exquisite, but this time Hasegawa just glanced at them quickly and then focused on the plot again
Failed!
Hasegawa directly gave Shiina Ma's three words
To be honest, he denied Shiina Mahara's drawings three times, especially Shiina Mahara's paintings were still so serious. Even if Hasegawa didn't think he had any selfish intentions, it was all caused by Shiina Mahara himself. However, when he denies them three times in a row, Hasegawa felt a little embarrassed when he said Shiina Mahara was unqualified again.
OK I will repaint it!
Shiina Mashiro simply responded to Hasegawa
No rise or tantrum, a simple sentence
Looking at Shiina Mashi's answer, Hasegawa almost felt Shiina Mashi's serious attitude even through the communication software.
Otherwise, let's do it, Shiina Mashira, come to me, I'll tell you how to draw it. Hasegawa gave Shiina Mashira's hair this message and went over with Shiina Mashira's hair.
But after Hasegawa sent this message, he immediately realized that Shiina Mahara is a beautiful girl, a young and weak girl who is powerless, and lets people come to their home. This behavior is a bit too much, especially since he and Shiina Mahara only met once, and even the chats online were limited to comics.
So Hasegawa immediately wanted to send a message to Shiina Mahara again, explaining that he had no other ideas. He could contact Shiina Mahara online and tell her how to draw it. He didn't need Shiina Mahara to come to him.
However, before Hasegawa's text message was edited, Shiina Mashiro had already sent a message
good!
It was still a simple word. Looking at Shiina Mashi's answer, Hasegawa scratched his head a little troubledly. Why did Shiina Mashi agree so readily?
address!
Looking at the text message sent by Shiina Mashiba again, Hasegawa hesitated for a while and edited it: Shiina, we can communicate online, I will tell you how to draw it online.
No, the network is inconvenient to address!
Seeing that Shiina Mashiro was like this, Hasegawa felt embarrassed to continue saying something
I can only send the address I live in.
But after waiting for a while, Hasegawa didn't see Shiina Mashiro's return
This made Hasegawa a little strange
Just say it, it is indeed not very right for a girl to go to a man's house rashly
But Shiina Mahara's attitude seemed very firm before, so he shouldn't consider these things. At this time, it should have arrived, but Shiina Mahara has never arrived yet
Could it be that she is not here? Hasegawa was relieved when he thought about this. After all, Hasegawa really felt that a girl Shiina Mahara was really unqualified to come to her home.
But at this time, Hasegawa's cell phone ringing
Picking up the phone and seeing it was Shiina Mashiro
Hasegawa thought it was Shiina Mashiba who said that he would not come to Hasegawa's house, so he called Hasegawa to explain.
So Hasegawa didn't care much, so he answered the phone directly
Hasegawa, I'm lost
Ah? Hasegawa was stunned when he heard Shiina Mashiro's words: You are lost?
Yes, I'm lost, please pick me up
This, okay, where are you now? I'll pick you up
have no idea
Then look, are there any iconic things around?
I stood under a piece of white clouds, and the shape of the white clouds looked like an annual ring cake
... Hasegawa almost choked to death by Shiina Mashi's words: What about this? Is there anything else? For example, buildings, stores or other things? Hasegawa's tone was a little helpless.
There is a cake shop here to buy annual ring cakes
...It's the annual ring cake again, so what's the name of that cake shop?
Sago Cake Shop
OK, you're waiting for me there, I'll go find you
Hasegawa clicked on the map and tried to find the sago cake shop that Shiina Mashiro mentioned on the map
But when Hasegawa searched, he found that there seemed to be several stores called Saimi Cake Shop in Tokyo.
However, Hasegawa found a cake shop closest to Shiina Mashi. No, it is the closest cake shop in Chishichi Chiba's house. This cake shop is still in the middle of Chishichi Chiba's house and Hasegawa's house. Shiina Mashihara would have to pass by if he came to his own house.
So Hasegawa didn't think much about it and rushed over to the cake shop.
But after Hasegawa rushed over, Shiina Mashiro was not found around this cake shop.
Hasegawa even asked people around him specifically, and they seemed to have never seen Shiina Mashiro before.
This made Hasegawa quite helpless. He called Shiina Mashiro and then confirmed that she was still in place and did not leave. Hasegawa then confirmed that Shiina Mashiro was not here.
A little headache, since that's the case, Hasegawa rushed to another cake shop
But another cake shop is not close to Hasegawa's house and Chihishi's house. Generally speaking, people shouldn't take that road at all, but thinking about Shiina Mashiro said that he was already lost.
Then it is normal to go to other roads when you get lost
But Hasegawa didn't expect that after he rushed over, he still couldn't find Shiina Mashiro
So Hasegawa had to look for cake shops one by one
Finally, Hasegawa found Shiina Mashiraki in the exact opposite direction from Chishi Chiba's family and his own family.
This made Hasegawa feel very speechless. He walked through the direction as soon as he went out, right?
When Hasegawa found Shiina Mashi, he saw Shiina Mashi squatting in front of the large glass window outside the cake shop, staring at the annual ring cake inside without blinking
Looking at Shiina Mashiro's appearance, Hasegawa, who had originally planned to say something, was unable to say anything in the end.
Shiina, I'm here. Hasegawa stood behind Shiina Mashiro and spoke.
Hasegawa, I'm hungry. Shiina Mabashi raised his head, and a hint of silly eyes revealed a hint of camaraderie, just like a kitten eager to feed the raised one.
Hungry? Hasegawa looked at the current time. Indeed, it has been a long time since Shiina Mashiro went out, and it is almost time for supper. Shiina Mashiro felt hungry.
Let's find a restaurant nearby to have dinner first. Hasegawa said to Shiina Mashiro
No, I want to eat the annual ring cake. Shiina Mashiro said, while pointing out his fingers on the glass of the window. She pointed at the direction she was putting the annual ring cake.
Want to eat the annual ring cake? OK, wait a moment, I'll buy it now. Hasegawa said that, and at the same time he couldn't help but shake his head
Facing Shiina Mashi's small request, Hasegawa couldn't think of rejecting it.
After buying the annual ring cake, Shiina Mashiro started to eat it with the annual ring cake, piece after piece, really, I was ready to eat enough to be full.
Shiina Mashiro looked at Hasegawa and paused for a moment, then raised the annual ring cake in his hand: Hasegawa, do you want to eat annual ring cake too?
No, you eat it yourself, I'm not very hungry yet. Hasegawa waved his hand, and the annual ring cake was regarded as a treasure by Shiina Mashiro
Hasegawa does not have that kind of idea of winning the favor, and Hasegawa does not have any special preference for annual ring cakes. Whether to eat or not is nothing to him.
Teacher Shiina, it's getting late now, otherwise I'll send you home
No Shiina Mashiro shook her head
Hum? Is there any other place for Mr. Shiina to go?
Go to Hasegawa's home to draw comics. Shiina Mashiro answered seriously
Teacher Shiina, it's getting late now and it's almost dark. It's not appropriate to go to my house at this time. Wait until tomorrow, and go to my house tomorrow. Hasegawa said to Shiina Mashiro
Shiina Mashiro shook her head: No, because I want to draw a comic
Otherwise, I will go to your house and I will go with you. I will tell you how I will leave after painting. Hasegawa thinks this idea is good.
Don't go to Hasegawa's house tomorrow. If Hasegawa doesn't take me there, I will get lost. Shiina Mashiro shook her head and said stubbornly
... Then I will pick you up tomorrow
No, this will be very troublesome and it will make you very troublesome. Shiina Masashi still shook her head
Looking at Shiina Mashi, Hasegawa couldn't smile bitterly. At the same time, Hasegawa also had a little more appreciation for Shiina Mashi.
Although Shizuna Masashi's personality has certain defects, Shizuna Masashi's head doesn't seem to be very smart.
But Shiina Mashiro is also very good at thinking about others, and the serious attitude he was when drawing comics
Hasegawa suddenly discovered that although Shiina Mashiro was a little simpler, his personality was really good, or very excellent.
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