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Appendix 1: Character Score

The time span of the whole book is about one year. The first episode began in October 1999, and Li Guanxiong escaped was August 2000.

The last two or three episodes span is quite large, and the award ceremony is usually before mid-January of the following year, and the ending plot is already mid-2001.

The settings and writing methods of these characters discussed below are indeed the author's own writing ideas.

As for whether it has been written successfully, everyone will evaluate it yourself

After all, in order to take care of the pleasure of the meat show, I often unconsciously put other factors aside...

Li Guanxiong

Age: about 40 years old

Identity: Chairman of Zhongdu Group, male lead

As the male lead in the whole book, I wonder if readers are satisfied with Li Guanxiong’s description? The author himself is actually not very satisfied with it, and he feels that the writing is too stereotyped.

This character is tough, cruel, revengeful, arrogant, dare to take risks, dare to play hard...

He is ruthless and can make decisions, but often he is too arrogant and relies too much on excessive control

The sex was too smooth before, and when there was a gap in control, it would naturally lead to loopholes.

The whole book shows that he is careless and arrogant, and is not as wise and powerful as his image. He also brings a group of pig teammates, so it is reasonable to be plotted later.

For example, although Liu Jiaying's final counterattack was not without flaws, the author actually did not write that Li Guanxiong had any response to this, and he was not mentally prepared for the rebellion of female celebrities.

So Li Guanxiong actually has many weaknesses, which are far from being unbeatable. As the author writes, he feels it is a bit funny to give him such a relatively domineering reputation, not to mention that he is just an illegitimate child

The book also writes many times that Li Guanxiong has committed many other crimes in addition to killing people and setting fire to force good men to become prostitutes.

The most important thing about it is drug trafficking. The reason why I did not rewrite the details of Lao Li's drug trafficking is mainly because I didn't want to spread the plot too much, and I didn't intend to let these heroines get poisoned.

I originally planned to write most of his companies as his money laundering tools, but it's okay to write it as you write it. There are too many troubles, so it's better to pay more attention to the heroine and write more mediocre scenes.

In order to make the characters more three-dimensional and plump, two relatively soft places were dug in his heart: Lu Xueyuan and An Lan

Lu Xueyuan highlighted his endless thoughts, but in fact he was unwilling to accept it. In the end, he transferred this feeling to his daughter Qian'er.

An Lan has written all kinds of open and secretly since the beginning. In fact, it is the woman Li Guanxiong really cares about. I wonder if you have experienced it?

Of course, at the end, he wrote about his obsession with having a son, which is a story later

I think there are two reasons for his image to be stereotyped: First, the author of this book focuses on women. In order to set off the image of a woman, men, even the male lead, have retreated from attention and energy. After all, I don’t have much effort on Li Guanxiong; second, this character has been sacrificed too much by other things. In order to take care of the image descriptions of female characters such as Ling Yunting, Yang Dan, An Lan, Lin Zhaoxian, Li Guanxiong always shifts his image settings from time to time in writing, and even sacrifices the image of the male protagonist in order to take care of the evil taste of a certain meat scene.

To be honest, in this book, the author actually did not think that Li Guanxiong was the core character, and all he wanted to write about was women!

Therefore, for some readers who are used to substituting the male protagonist, I would like to say sorry here, because Li Guanxiong is not easy to substitute, or it is not very pleasant to substitute.

After all, I never considered substituting this kind of thing in the process of writing.

I usually don't substitute for erotic novels, even if there are occasional ones, it's random. Which scene is considered to be

In fact, this article does not run through the whole story, but is a group drama. The main task of the character Li Guanxiong is not a mediocre drama. From a literary perspective, his main function is to build a story structure.

So the halo of this male protagonist has actually been diluted

Many of Li Guanxiong's secret operations in the whole book are not written out. The main reason is that they don't want to involve too much, and they are too extravagant and difficult to finish later. It is better to focus more on the heroines.

For example, he bribed high-ranking officials, but in fact he wrote a lot of secrets, including giving lawyer Liu a free time to Justice Xu for prostitution. It was originally a kind of sexual bribery, but they didn't expect that the two of them would collude to plot against him.

But in fact, Li Guanxiong's relationship network is not stable. It is all about bribery and collusion between interests, but has not formed a solid community of interests. This is emphasized in the book, so when something happens, the relationship network can easily collapse.

Li Guanxiong's ending, from the beginning, he has decided to write about Gulanson Island, which is to leave a way out for Li Guanxiong. This way out can be said to have been planned for a long time, and determines the way of writing and moving the fate of the actresses.

The author does not have a male pig's feet and a street complex, and it depends on the plot.

Some people hope that the good guys will win in the end, but I would say that in the so-called dark literature, evil is hard to really defeat...

Some readers think that Li Guanxiong is too bad and deserves to die, and it is not unconsidered that he wrote Lao Li to death, but he quickly rejected it.

After all, too many readers have a complex of substitutes. As the male lead, Lao Li is so emotionally unacceptable.

When I first wrote "Linglong Nie Resentment", I insisted on letting Cheng enter the PU Street and resisted a lot of pressure, and until now, many readers are still worried about it.

So it is understandable that the Linglong Perfect Edition appears on the Internet. I regard the Perfect Edition as a fan novel by netizens.

So, Brother Li will not die. Although he still seems to be acting like a mighty man, he doesn't want him to be too comfortable.

Although the thunders buried for him in the ending are considered for the sequel or the extra ambush, the most important thing is to show that what he finally has is just a small and incomplete paradise.

Ling Yunting

Age: 20 years old

Identity: Li Guanxiong’s popular jade singer, core heroine

Ling Yunting was the first heroine in the initial setting. This revision did emphasize the description of Ling Yunting's image. Of course, at the end, it should be the first female, but the proportion of other female characters has greatly increased, which has diluted her importance to a certain extent.

Especially in the second half of the plot, which is almost thirty episodes from the fall of Lao Ou to the escape of Li Guanxiong, Ling Yunting's performance and role have been weakened too much, and she is a little sorry for her identity as the first female.

Ling Yunting's character is beautiful, pure, kind, courageous, soft on the outside and hard on the inside, and has talent and rich emotions. She can maintain her original intention in desperate adversity, be compassionate and willing to sacrifice

After all, not only is it super good-looking and perfect in figure, but it is even a cute baby with a perfect mind and personality.

This kind of character is actually not easy to write, it is very easy to write indirectly, and I think it seems to be a bit biased. Too much emphasis on her perfection can easily arouse the readers and even the author's rebellious psychology.

Ling Yunting's name is quite satisfactory

As the first angel of the cloud, I simply thought of the two words Lingyun, which sounds noble and followed by a commonly used female name. So I chose the word Ting, which has its own beauty, quietness and purity, which is more in line with her personality.

The book has made a lot of contributions to Ling Yunting's performance career, and also highlights her talent for singing, acting and even creation. Therefore, she uses more literary brushwork in some paragraphs, focusing on romanticizing Ling Yunting's image.

For example, when creating "Chaos" and "Cicadas", when learning from Lin Zhaoxian, when they were in love with Xiao Nian, when they were at the climax of the concert, etc., they were all heavy writings describing Ling Yunting's image.

I'm very happy that the concert was recognized by everyone. For Ling Yunting's acting career, the author must give her a peak.

However, in the writing of this perverted author, being too brilliant is often not a good thing, because the gap will be even more disparate...

There have been doubts about Ling Yunting's creative talent

The author has put some effort into this. He doesn't want Ling Yunting to be just a beautiful vase. He wants her to be more connotative.

She has been laying the foundation for the early stages. She is a top student in the Conservatory of Music and has a good musical talent. So after debuting as a singer, she was inspired by her feelings and could write songs.

I don’t know if it’s enough to let her write two hit songs to show her creative talent?

These two songs are inspirational songs that embody her dreams and have devoted her hard work.

Ling Yunting's anti-intention is actually not as good as Liu Jiaying at the beginning. Le Jingchan is firm, with Ling Yunting as the image spokesperson and Liu Jiaying as the actual core of the actresses. They are essentially not just about resistance, but rather about struggle. They really don't have many trump cards. After Du Kexiu fell, she can only rely on Liu Jiaying.

This story line was designed early in the morning, and there was no intention to open more light channels for them and design more resistance scenes, so Ling Yunting was lost for a while and used as exercise.

My mental progress towards Ling Yunting's resistance to Li Guanxiong was to write about her passiveness from the beginning, gradually developing to the end, but she became the one who sacrificed her life and was desperate. She wanted to write about the strongest part of her heart under her weak appearance and the strongest part of her heart.

Of course, if you write it as unsuccessful, put it aside. After all, in erotic novels, the characters ultimately serve the sensory feeling of the flesh-show.

Regarding Ling Yunting's ending, there are indeed many friends who hope to give her a better ending

But in fact, because the setting given to her was too perfect, the ending was definitely not perfect. What dark aesthetics are going to destroy is the most perfect thing.

And the more the heroine is, the more he will be ravaged, isn’t this the law of erotic novels?

So the more perfect Ling Yunting acts, the stronger she becomes, the more she will end up falling.

When I first started writing about Gulanson Island, I kept ambushing the ending. Ling Yunting was the only protagonist who confirmed the ending at the beginning. Only the final details were hesitant. The most miserable idea was to write the red cotton that kept its body clean. Life was worse than death every day.

This is actually more in line with Li Guanxiong's revenge mentality, but the author has said it N times and is ruthless...

The final way to write is still to show mercy to your subordinates

Since Ling Yunting doesn't want her to seek death, she has to give her a reason to survive. In addition to psychological description, both her mother and her fetus are her weakness.

In the end, the whole book did not completely fall into her. She still left a little bright tail and could still keep her mentality awake. The fetus gave her a little spiritual support for her dark life on the island.

Some readers suggested that Ling Yunting threaten Li Guanxiong with her fetus?

It's not impossible to be established

And the current setting even makes her turn a turnaround

Le Jingchan

Age: 27 years old

Identity: A qi Kung Fu actress, one of the core heroines

Le Jingchan's character is a tall, big-breasted beauty with a straightforward personality, she hates evil, and is very sensitive to her image. She is the one who is the most scheming among the heroines.

Looking at the storyline of the whole book, Le Jingchan is the protagonist with the most violent conflict in his heart. Almost every ups and downs are the kind that will make people collapse.

She worked hard all the way and survived, but when her public image eventually collapsed completely, her defense line also collapsed completely.

Most of the descriptions of Le Jingchan in the whole book are in the sway of impulse and restraint, trying to remain calm. The author's purpose is to allow these forced suppression to gradually accumulate, and wait until the moment of her despair is full. This is the theme of the episode "90 Unbanned Slut"

But at the end of the book, Le Jingchan's image seemed to be partially diluted by the main plot. I hope the final gap can meet expectations

Writing about Le Jingchan, she has always let her despair and hope sway and persevere

As one of the core characters in the whole article, Sister Le’s life reached the bottom of the valley in the previous chapter, and the next chapter will probably rebound. Constant ups and downs are one of the main clues of the whole book. The final goal mentioned earlier is to create a gap.

Her forbearance is different from Ling Yunting. She is forced to bite her teeth and swallow her tears. In fact, she lacks tenacity than Ling Yunting.

Although her mentality has been growing, her body and psychology have been changing as the training deepens. This has been described at all stages.

The relationship between Le Jingchan and several major female characters is also one of the main clues that connect the whole book

Her relationship with Liu Jiaying is the closest, she is a best friend and a soulmate, and she has full trust between them.

Therefore, when Liu Jiaying was sexy, the person she wanted to have lily was Le Jingchan; and when Le Jingchan fell, she had almost no hesitation or embarrassment about Liu Jiaying's rape

After writing the whole book, I realized that Liu Le and the other two were involved in the plot together were less written, just the part when Le Jingchan just fell.

Two good friends with distinct personalities have been abused all the time, and it is much more exciting.

Her relationship with Du Kexiu should be purer friendship

They actually didn't have a deep relationship, but they just sent Yang Tong's Agen to the police station together to meet him. However, the author wanted to secretly write that there was a certain resonance between them. I wonder if you have experienced it.

Therefore, Le Jingchan and Du Kexiu have a emotional foundation, and the scene of Du Kexiu being cruelly treated will definitely shock Le Jingchan's heart.

I once considered the scene where Le Jingchan exploded, but due to the overall design limitations of the plot, she did not really make her come out. It only emphasized Le Jingchan's strong impulse to rescue Du Kexiu, and superimposed the pain of the rescue operation on the block in Le Jingchan's heart.

I want to write the relationship between her and Ling Yunting as a true sisterhood, a sister who truly relies on each other and trusts each other.

Therefore, Le Jingchan's loss was due to her natural chivalrous and bravery, but she was more of arguing for her little sister.

In the whole book, Le Jingchan has a strong desire to protect Ling Yunting, and her sisterly relationship with Ling Yunting is also one of the main characters in the overall situation.

As for after writing this, someone asked if there is a real relationship between women?

This topic is too big. At least in the setting of this book, Le Jingchan and Ling Yunting have real feelings, so there is no need to make up other relationships too clearly.

At least, it’s okay to just treat them as comrades in the underground party, haha!

There are many flesh-and-hearted dramas in the middle of the book

After all, a strong beauty with a strong figure has a lot of attention and is abused by lust. She has a lot of room for imagination. This is why everyone likes to see her as a slut?

In fact, in the initial setting, Le Jingchan was just a supporting actress. It was because she received more attention and she was promoted to one of the core heroines as she wrote in the old version.

Do you think Le Jingchan’s ending is good?

In fact, the author believes that psychologically speaking, Le Jingchan is the one who defeated the most

Although her physical freedom, her physical and mental decline, and even her self-deprecating depravity was the cliff-like feeling that she hoped to achieve after a long and deliberate story.

Then the final question is: Is Le Jingchan really born lewd?

The author refuses to give a clear answer, what do you think?

Yang Dan

Age: 19 years old

Identity: Member of the beautiful girl group under Li Guanxiong, one of the core heroines

Yang Dan's character is a young, lively, and smiling girl, with a stingy personality and impulsive personality

Yang Dan spent a lot of effort when re-cultivating, especially after she began to get distant from Zhang Luning, she used a lot of ink, hoping to set up her image and be different from the other heroines.

Yang Dan’s image really wants to write her as a more lively, cute and simple girl, so her resistance was more intense than Zhang Luning at the beginning.

But when she found that her body had been stained and everything could not be changed, she gradually learned to endure it.

The book also mentioned several times that the slave training of Yang Dan is far less smooth than Zhang Luning. Her resistance to sex slaves is much stronger than Zhang Luning.

Yang Dan’s real plot starts in an episode of the Hospital Shocking. When she learned that her mother and sister were raped and pregnant, Wu Lei was helpless. After having a rift with Zhang Luning, she felt even more confused. I tried to write about Yang Dan’s impossible peace.

So, when she found out that Ling Yunting had a desire to yearn for light, she rashly expressed her opinion to Ling Yunting, trying to grab a life-saving straw

When Ling Yunting dared not really trust her and refused, the life-saving straw she found was Feng Jie, who was more brainless than her, and was used by Li Guanxiong.

Therefore, she killed Agen regardless of the consequences, which is also a manifestation of this personality. When this angry girl broke out, she could not find a safer way to hide herself. It was beyond her ability

Yang Dan is just an innocent girl. Although she has played tricks on Feng Jie and Agen, it is still a silly and sweet way in nature, and it is not a scheming thing.

After the incident, she was cruelly tortured. Her performance and mentality were different from Du Kexiu. She couldn't have more ideas, but just endured it in pain, which was equivalent to waiting for death in vain.

When I was writing, I was thinking, if Qian'er was replaced, she would probably find a way to seduce the big cock?

Or try to instigate one or two minions who are better for her

When designing the plot at first, I didn't expect the main plot to go so long, so I didn't arrange more stories for Yang Dan in the later stage.

But after the main plot length is extended, Yang Dan's plot appears weak, and he is even a little out of Ling Yunting's main line

As one of the three core heroines in the book, her later plot was not able to be with other protagonists, and this story structure was a bit of a failure

It’s not that I have considered combining Yang Dan’s story with Ling Yunting more closely, such as asking her to directly join the actress league, because there was a foreshadowing before, which is possible.

However, the entire story line between Ling Yunting and Yang Dan has been set up, and the extracurricular changes have been made. It takes not only to consume the pen and brain, but also not much room for meat play to expand. More importantly, I didn't think about what role Yang Dan can play in the actress league.

There must be good meat scenes, unless the preset ending reconstruction is completely overturned, so I still don’t have to worry about it. I set Ling Yunting and Liu Jiaying as the main line, and Yang Dan and Du Kexiu are dealt with as the branch line.

It hurt Yang Dan, but it made the author the lazy old man

Yang Dan's last abuse scenes were originally expected to be very severe. With An Lan's hatred and methods, she would definitely make her life worse than death.

I brag about it in the middle of the serialization, saying that everyone can't guess who was the worst abuser, referring to Yang Dan, who will be tortured to death by An Lan.

But when I actually wrote it, I couldn't even be ruthless against this cute little girl, even the author of the black-bellied man was not much more miserable than Du Kexiu's writing this way. It was far less miserable than Du Kexiu's initial tragic level. It was so ruthless that I actually felt!

Maybe I am really old, but I am merciful, haha!

Yang Dan's ending gave her a chance to be reborn, and did not emphasize whether she was still in danger of falling again.

Actually, I have been hesitating since the middle of writing. This character will either fall into hell forever or be reborn, but since I decided to release her, I will not leave any more thorns for her.

Liu Jiaying

Age: about 30 years old

Identity: Lawyer

Liu Jiaying's character is a beautiful young woman. The lawyer's coat she wears is full of excitement of the temptation of uniforms. Her grudges with Li Guanxiong are the main storyline of the whole book from beginning to end.

Liu Jiaying is smart and scheming, with the determination and courage to move forward. She is actually the most sober and clearest among all the heroines in the book.

Liu Jiaying's name is deliberately popular, just to give a good young woman the feeling

With the appearance of an eloquent female lawyer, she also feels a bit heroic and cool.

Such an intellectual beautiful mature woman feels more happy when she abuses her.

If we only look at the meat show, Liu Jiaying is obviously not the protagonist, and it does not constitute the main course of the meat show. Most of the time, it is really just accessories.

But from the plot point of view, Liu Jiaying can be said to be a main engine for plot composition and promotion

Especially in the later stages, she almost became the only hope for actresses

However, when I really wrote it in the later stage, I deliberately weakened her role. Sometimes I didn't show up for several chapters.

The main reason is that it feels that Ling Yunting, Le Jingchan and the others are basically helpless at that stage, and the light is a bit dim. Liu Jiaying is too dazzling and will dominate the audience, so she might as well weaken her plot.

Including the plot of trampling Li Guanxiong to death in the end, it was originally set to follow the main line of lawyer Liu's lawsuit, allowing Liu Jiaying to completely defeat Li Guanxiong in court.

But the plot always feels thin, and Wang Bang Fan Bozhong has already described a lot...

But as soon as the Wang Bang came out, Liu Jiaying's plan and Le Jingchan and Lin Zhaoxian's active sacrifice were weakened too much, and I feel a little sorry for them, haha

Liu Jiaying had a firm anti-mind from the beginning, and she also fully understood Li Guanxiong's background and knew his character and methods.

Because she didn't want her to make arrogance too early, she set her mind to have parents and sons. However, Liu Jiaying actually made it very early to send her relatives away and stayed to work hard to do her own thing.

Therefore, she could do her best to be humble in front of Li Guanxiong, but secretly formed gangs behind her back, and conspired to be the chess piece of justice as her chess piece

In order to defeat Li Guanxiong, Liu Jiaying was not only willing to sacrifice everything, but also had a clear goal and plan early in the morning. She was more sober than Ling Yunting and Le Jingchan. She was the de facto backbone of the actress league. Especially after Du Kexiu fell, she was almost alone carrying the banner of the actress league and moving forward.

After being trained by gang rape, Liu Jiaying became sensitive and began to fall into depravity. In fact, it was written in the early days.

Later, including her taking the initiative to seduce Xu Lifa, seduce Xiaonian, trying to be with Le Jingchan and Baihe, and sometimes even making a flirty automatically for no reason, she wanted to write that as a mature woman, her body had actually been partially trained.

If Liu Jiaying's story continues, she will be a slutty woman

But in the end of the story, I still forced Liu Jiaying to keep her mentally awake, and allowed her to control her uneasy body, so that she could continue to be a strong woman.

Liu Jiaying's original setting was a miserable ending. After all, she is also a very good material for being abused, which is different from the final writing style.

The main purpose of letting her escape from the sky is that she doesn't want the entire actress alliance to be wiped out. Although many people read novels from Li Guanxiong's perspective, many friends also stand from the perspective of female celebrities.

Besides, the plot on Slave Island is rich enough, there is no need to add another one

The behind is that he doesn't want Li Guanxiong to be too comfortable, and he wants to leave a thorn in his heart, so that even if he dominates his corner, he will know that he is still a failure and that his paradise is incomplete

Because Liu Jiaying's actions are not only betrayal of Li Guanxiong, but also of ruthless mockery of him, Li Guanxiong hates her the most, and the woman who wants to tear it to pieces the most should also be the lawyer of Liu Jiaying.

Zhang Luning

Age: 18 years old

Identity: Member of the Beautiful Girls Group under Li Guanxiong

Zhang Luning's character was finally distinguished from Yang Dan in the remastered version and tried to form a sharp contrast.

If Yang Dan’s personality is more ideal, then Zhang Luning is a realistic school; Yang Dan is lively and outgoing, Zhang Luning is calm and introverted

Unlike Yang Dan, Zhang Luning thought that she could not fight against Li Guanxiong and the others at all, and wisely chose to accept it.

For the sake of his family, Yang Dan would rather give up his career and even his life.

But here at Zhang Luning, her sexy sister and scheming partner can be abandoned

Even though she didn't take the initiative to betray Yang Dan's abuse and Zhang Luci's demise, she actually accepted the consequences of her death.

Zhang Luning felt at ease about finally enjoying the rebellious achievements of Ling Yunting and others and becoming the little queen of the music industry. She would think that everything was obtained through her unremitting efforts.

The book has been written from the beginning. Zhang Luning is not as talented as Yang Dan when dealing with her acting career, but she is more attentive, more focused and harder.

The original idea of ​​the book is that Ling Yunting, Yang Dan and Zhang Luning, as the three heroines, each with their own side plots. From the beginning, they showed their own plots and then came down together.

But later, because Le Jingchan, Liu Jiaying and even Du Kexiu's stories seemed to be more popular with readers. The author adjusted the storyline from the old version more than ten years ago, and the one who sacrificed his status was Zhang Luning, who was sacrificed.

Zhang Luning, whose status in the whole book has declined, did have the intention of making her evil in the early writing style, but it quickly gave up the idea.

Because the author herself doesn't like women who are evil, even An Lan, who is Li Guanxiong's accomplice, I try to give her an independent perspective and do not write it as a negative angle.

Even if Du Kexiu turns black among readers and calls for a high voice, although she reluctantly turns partially into black in the later period, she is just in action rather than in her heart. The author insists on Du Kexiu's psychological bottom line in a silly manner.

Zhang Luning designed an independent branch from the beginning. Zhang Luci has already appeared in the old version, just to provoke this clue

Although the author also forgot the details of this branch line during the revision, the basic idea was remembered, which was to contrast Yang Dan.

However, the basic idea when it was just re-revised was to complete the whole book as soon as possible and try not to unfold the plot, so consider cutting off all the branches of Zhang Luning and not mentioning them.

But in the end, I feel that it is not good to cut all the money, and it is also an important female character after all. Moreover, Zhang Luci has already appeared, so she has a clear idea of ​​her role.

So I decided to let Zhang Luning's branch line be closed and write it, and try to be as simple as possible. Zhang Luning's other sisters and friends who were originally planned will not appear, so that the elder sister who had already shown a slutty expression would be just a sign of it.

The eldest sister Zhang Luci originally planned to be a supporting character for Zhang Luning's branch line. Its role is similar to Yang Tong's branch line. She includes her brainless and ill-hearted image, and she also deliberately wants to compare with Yang Tong's silly white sweetness.

However, the revisioned version of Yang Dan is still one of the core characters, and the roles between Yang Tong and her mother have increased a lot; Zhang Luning's status in the whole article has declined, so Sister Zhang only made a few games casually

What's more, Sister Zhang is definitely not as attractive as Yang Xiaomei or even Yang's mother, so her other scenes were deleted, it's no pity

Anyway, the role of Zhang Luci in setting off Zhang Luning's image has been completed, so I will no longer mention her at the ending

An Lan

Age: 29 years old

Identity: Li Guanxiong's assistant, wife

An Lan's character is very obvious: she is bright and scheming, and her leadership skills are particularly outstanding. The most important thing is: she loves Li Guanxiong deeply and is devoted to him, so that she can erase all herself.

Therefore, An Lan wrote that she became a kind of little woman who was desperate for men. This is what the extra chapter "An Lan's Confession" emphasizes.

She is a very pure person. The core of her outlook on life and right and wrong is Li Guanxiong. Her brother Xiong is right in everything. Those who are opposite to Brother Xiong are bad people, so she also does bad things, but her foothold lies in Li Guanxiong.

An Lan can tolerate Li Guanxiong playing with other women, and even help him design his biggest rival, Lu Xueyuan and his daughter, which reflects her position as a subordinate to Li Guanxiong.

But unlike the plot and character, I actually designed An Lan as an independent character, and it is definitely not a simple vassal of Li Guanxiong.

The description of An Lan's image has been spent on time. If this image must be analyzed from human nature, it is of course a tragic role, but what can she say when she is happy with it?

What a little sorry for An Lan is that the space for giving her flesh scenes is too small, and there are not many scenes in the whole article.

The only episode that specializes in An Lan is unfortunately "The Soul of the Black Prison" where she was tortured to death

The revised version does not write about An Lan's butt plot in detail, because there has been an extra chapter in the early years ("Hand-turning Stars and Transfer Extra Chapter: An Lan's Confession"), so it should not be difficult to search.

The initial setting was that she did not intend to recover An Lan's asshole. During the rework, she was considering that she wanted to get pregnant or something, so the treatment of her asshole was effective, although she did not really recover in the end.

The ending of An Lan was written with passion very early on, but after only 2,000 words, something was forced to be interrupted. The feeling was never recovered, so it took half a year to finish it until May this year.

In terms of the effect, I think it's average, although the final length is twice as long as expected

After the 88th episode of abuse of An Lan, everyone had a great disagreement on An Lan's handling methods. Some senior readers also sent me a private message saying it was difficult to accept it.

This inspired me to finally remember the original setting more than ten years ago: After Li Guanxiong's failure, An Lan took the initiative to take charge of Li Guanxiong's crimes and covered Li Guanxiong's escape. He was imprisoned for most of Li Guanxiong's crimes and was sentenced to a long sentence. He missed Li Guanxiong hard in prison.

However, when re-repair, I only remember a rough idea, forgot to take the initiative to take the blame, so I re-set the plot.

Thinking back, taking the initiative to take the blame is also the finishing touch to show An Lan's character image, and the initial set content is indeed more in line with An Lan's image and the foreshadowing in the extra chapter.

But when I remember that the whole book was almost finished, I had to follow the new settings

The current character setting is to respond to Li Guanxiong's original intention of marrying An Lan: to have a son!

So An Lan got pregnant and led to the ending of Li Guanxiong's crazy desire for his son in the end

An Lan did not intend to write her to death at the beginning

When she started reworking, she was just set on being abused in prison and miscarriage

But as Director Fan Bozhong's plot deepens, general abuse is not enough to make Director Fan vent his anger

The more important reason is that I originally wanted to write Du Kexiu as a female lie who was tortured to death, but after giving up Du Kexiu, I decided to pass on this plot to others.

There are actually only two choices to consider: Liu Jiaying and An Lan, while Ling Yunting and Le Jingchan have been designed long ago. Lin Zhaoxian is too weak and does not match the plot. Yang Dan is indeed ruthless inability to create such a tragic scene.

After weighing the trade-offs, An Lan is more suitable, so I wrote it like that

Du Kexiu

Age: about 25 years old

Identity: TV female anchor, reporter

Du Kexiu's character is a cheerful, sunny and fashionable girl who hates evil. She has a strong background and connections. She is not only eloquent but also capable and capable. Her joining is a very powerful foreign player for the actress league and has played an important role.

So once she lost, Ling Yunting and the others were helpless

Du Kexiu's psychological quality is also relatively strong. My writing style is to be tough on the outside and strong on the inside, so Yuan Xian's simple and rough rape and abuse did not make her truly surrender, but instead strengthened her ambition to die.

After finalizing the plot of Du Kexiu's ending, he deliberately wrote that Du Kexiu still has a certain desire to survive. Ding Shangfang gave her a fatal sense of despair when she was the weakest, which made her collapse.

The episode where Du Kexiu collapsed and surrendered at sea was finalized after the plot. She was thinking a lot before going to bed at night, and the next day, nearly 10,000 words were completed in one go. I felt that I was OK

I remember that when I was serialized more than ten years ago, I issued a questionnaire, asking everyone to comment on the female character I want to fuck the most

As a result, Du Kexiu, who didn't appear much at the time and had no flesh-shows, ranked first. It was beyond my expectations. It seems that everyone still likes to play such a woman with personality!

After the rehabilitation, Du Kexiu was also in the focus of attention for a long time. Everyone was very interested in her and had the most suggestions for her follow-up plot. There were a variety of things. I finally adopted some of them.

A friend said that if Du Kexiu confesses to the actress league after the collapse, this is completely explained. Du Kexiu is a smart person and she has no reason to confess her conspiracy because it is not good for her at all. Li Guanxiong has no idea that their small organization exists, so why don’t he add a crime to herself for no reason?

Du Kexiu was indeed planning to write it as a female lie at the beginning, but was tortured and killed in the revengeful torture of Li Guanxiong and others, and further stimulated Le Jingchan and Ling Yunting and others' determination to resist to the death.

I once set the title of "The Unyielding Xianghun" and wrote a short paragraph, which made anchor Du be a lie and died tragically. You can actually see that the episodes of the sprayed wine vessel really wrote her to death.

But in the end, due to strong opposition from a heavyweight reader, her ending was rewritten. The unyielding fragrance soul was transformed and turned into the fragrance soul of the black prison.

Now this slightly black writing method has accepted everyone's suggestions and ideas and made some detailed results.

For example, some readers suggested that Du Kexiu betray a companion as a letter of fame. My reply at the time was: Whether it is true to vote for fame or falsely slander, it is okay to let her become a true evil. You can continue to stick to your beliefs and be a successful or unsuccessful heroine.

My final choice was that I didn't want her to turn completely into black, and I felt that it was not interesting to be completely enslaved, so I took such a half-black result, and asked Ling Yunting to train her.

Therefore, Du Kexiu cannot be considered a real blackening. Some readers think she is looking for an alliance. The author herself agrees with this statement, which is actually a manifestation of a strong desire to survive.

Du Kexiu’s nude broadcast commentary on the island, I think this idea is a highlight, haha!

It is also a good explanation for her self-blame and self-degenerate

And her existence is also another choice given by the author for these tragic women, not just to resist to death or fall into depravity

The improvement of Du Kexiu's own status on the island actually affected Ling Yunting's mentality, allowing Ling Yunting, including girls like Gu Youyou to treat her as a sustenance to protect them. This is the additional effect Du Kexiu wrote to the end.

Lin Zhaoxian

Age: about 30 years old

Identity: Queen-level female singer

Lin Zhaoxian's character is a graceful and luxurious queen of the music scene. She is very proud of her acting achievements, has a persistent musical dream and excellent creative ability, and is very sensitive to musical notes.

Therefore, when she was suddenly kidnapped and humiliated and deliberately framed, Lin Zhaoxian's heart was very dissatisfied, and she must have been caught off guard and was not prepared. On the one hand, she tried hard to maintain her noble image, but on the other hand, she couldn't help but continue to compromise.

The original intention of writing this character is to set a contrast for Ling Yunting from the plot, and from the meat scene, it also tries to satisfy the sexual desire of playing with high-end mature female stars.

Lin Zhaoxian's character and willpower are soft and hard. If given a certain amount of space and energy, I think Lin Zhaoxian is also a character who can burst out with heat energy, but unfortunately it has not been written down completely.

Because during the writing process, Lin Zhaoxian's plot design did not fully and carefully planned, which led to her surrendering to Li Guanxiong and not knowing how to continue.

Her violent mental struggle at that stage, including her attitude of submitting to the past and after, as well as her comparison with Ling Yunting and the inspiration for Ling Yunting, was carefully considered.

Because this also affected Ling Yunting and indirectly affected the development of the subsequent plot, for example, it directly gave birth to the song "Chaos"

However, the plot has not been written since then, and it was still a bit formatted in the end.

After the revision, Lin Zhaoxian did not portray it as a key object. The author's hunchbacked and did not carefully design the plot. Li Guanxiong carefully teased her mood and ideas, and thus left it to waste, turning her into a simple sex slave.

This is where I'm sorry for Lin Zhaoxian

Another function of Lin Zhaoxian's existence is its influence on Ling Yunting, so she focused on writing about her conversation with Ling Yunting during the filming exchange.

Later, looking back, it would be more exciting to add a drama about Lin Lingtong abuse that was described in that stage.

Lin Zhaoxian wrote later on, the role scores are getting fewer and thinner.

There is really no way, so there are too many female characters to focus on, and Lin Zhaoxian's importance ranks relatively low

The tape incident was a temporary plot, because I felt that Lin Zhaoxian had a weak presence and was specially strengthened. I would like to connect the storyline behind it.

Lin Zhaoxian's mediocre scenes are relatively not many in the whole article, and in the end they are a bit out of the main line.

The ending of her cellar selling herself at a low price is actually an open design. There are many possibilities in the future. For example, she can be rescued by the police, influenced by Brother Rui, and she can be with Brother Rui like Du Kexiu, and sold to a darker place. She can be sent to the island after Brother Rui and Li Guanxiong join the line.

Readers can make up for what results they like

Ding Shangfang and Yuan Xian

Age: both are about 30 years old

Identity: Li Guanxiong's confidant

Ding Shangfang and Yuan Xian have common points, both Li Guanxiong's capable players, and they are even close to friends.

However, the old version almost ignored the image portrayal of these two people, and even the images of the two people were not distinguished.

This re-reconstruction also repositioned the two generals, focusing their original images on Yuan Xian and redesigning Ding Shangfang's image.

So some scenes that were originally Ding Shangfang's appearance in the remaster were changed to Yuan Xian.

The final character is that Ding Shangfang is in charge of Bai Dao's business and Yuan Xian is in charge of underworld

Ding Shangfang has a gloomy personality, has certain scheming, and has stronger business ability; while Yuan Xian is more reckless and direct, and does not know how to use tricks, and is a brainless bad guy

After this setting, Yuan Xian took on more mediocre functions, but he didn't think about how to train a woman. He just insisted on being a tough guy, was simple and crude, and was mainly responsible for causing trouble and causing hatred.

Ding Shangfang had ideas and purpose in how to train women, so he also had more room to play on the Slave Island.

How they treat women? Through Du Kexiu's despair, they have written a brief description of how they treat women.

They should say that they are all loyal to Li Guanxiong

However, Yuan Xian's loyalty was exposed and desperate, and eventually died to cover Li Guanxiong.

Ding Shangfang came to the ending part and was treated unfairly. His loyalty was obviously shaken, but the ending time was up. Will he rebel next?

The foreshadowing has been laid, everyone can make up for it with all their hearts

Jiang Meizhen and Yang Tong

Age: Jiang Meizhen 42 years old, Yang Tong 16 years old

Identity: Yang Dan's mother and sister

Jiang Meizhen is a weak and gentle housewife, and Yang Tong is a cute little loli with big breasts in her baby face and big breasts. Her character is very simple

However, in the later stage, based on the rationality of the plot, Jiang Meizhen highlights her nature of protecting her calf more. Yang Tong still maintains her naive and ignorant character, and the mother and daughter also give her a certain submissive slave trait.

Jiang Meizhen and Yang Tong were originally supporting roles to match Yang Dan and were architectural characters of Yang Dan’s branch. The choice of such an image is of course mainly for the arrangement of the flesh-and-hearted show.

In terms of effect, the author thinks it is pretty good, and the length of the meat drama is much larger than expected, so after killing Agen, their roles will basically end.

From the perspective of a mediocre scene, the mother and daughter have a lot of room for fantasy, and a sister who has become a celebrity can satisfy many people's sexual fantasies.

For example, the plot of the mother-in-law in the bridal chamber was thought of when she decided to write about the mother and daughter from the beginning, which is also a major pleasure point in Yang Dan's line.

For example, from the dark psychology, isn’t it the dream of many bad people to force a beautiful little girl to give her a baby?

What's more, it's mother and daughter flying together

Of course, it is not a bad idea to continue to play with them. For the sake of Jiang Meizhen, who has two daughters, the pregnant little loli Yang Tong, there is still a lot of room for fantasy as a meat show.

However, since the characters on the main line are obviously more important, they did not use more pens and ink in the end.

Of course, their ending is relatively good. Even though Yang Tong gave birth to Agen's son at a young age, it should be said that no one will harass them for the time being

The author has imagined that once the child grows up, he inherits his father's lustful nature, but his mother is so young, and there is still a lot of room to continue to imagine from the perspective of messy writing.

Lu Xueyuan

Age: 38 years old

Identity: Li Guanxiong's sister-in-law, dream lover

Lu Xueyuan is Li Guanxiong's eldest sister-in-law. After getting married, Li Guanxiong, who coveted her beauty, was raped several times. After her husband died, she lost to Li Guanxiong in court. She took her daughter to hide from disaster, but finally fell back into Li Guanxiong's hands because of her daughter's revenge. The mother and daughter were trained to become Li Guanxiong's personal sex slaves.

Judging from the positioning in the book, Lu Xueyuan's beauty should be said to be the most beautiful, and it is the kind that is so beautiful that it makes Li Guanxiong unable to help but attack when his brother was alive, and he still missed it for many years afterwards.

A friend mentioned that this sister-in-law was Lao Li’s first love and first night?

Actually, it’s not very important, and according to my opinion, it’s not!

How Li Guanxiong fell in love with Lu Xueyuan back then did not write it down, because it was a big deal to say this. In short, I understand that Lu Xueyuan is his heart disease.

Lu Xueyuan's image has not been considered too much, so it may not be clear enough in the end

But this is actually different from Yang Xiaoling back then. "Linglong Nie Resentment" is deliberately laid out most of the film, and Yang Xiaoling can even be said to be the central character of the entire structure.

Lu Xueyuan just couldn't write her handwriting and had never thought about it carefully, and she was not a core role.

Everyone can regard Lu Xueyuan and his daughter as auxiliary characters who describe Li Guanxiong's image

At the end of the writing, Lu Xueyuan's image was too weak, and she felt that she had a little failed.

After all, according to the previous statement, this should be a strong woman who has ideas and can be independent.

But after a long period of mediocre scenes, I found that she was indeed written too softly

So I had to put it soft and just give her a loving mother image again, explaining all her behaviors as a safeguarding her daughter and begging for it, and turning the focus of the description to Qian'er, trying to write a scheming girl who is completely different from other images

As everyone can see, Lu Xueyuan has almost no image portrayed in the last part, but only emphasizes her grievance and obedience, which exists as a special symbol in Li Guanxiong's mind.

Regarding Lu Xueyuan's position in Li Guanxiong's mind, my thoughts are: Lu Xueyuan is a heart disease that has become Li Guanxiong as a symbol. This heart disease is a strong possessive desire.

When I can't get it, I miss you all the time, but I don't cherish it after I get it.

The room pot at the bedside This episode describes Lao Li’s complex for his sister-in-law, which is completely pathological

For Lu Xueyuan, all he wanted was to gain was to be arrogant and completely dominate the other party's fate.

Lu Xueyuan and her daughter appeared very early, but they were vacant for dozens of episodes before they reappeared. It was not just a matter of plot setting. I need them to take on more important plot functions in the final stage and be a chess piece for Liu Jiaying to revise the old case.

If I had decided to write about this case in detail at that time, I would have arranged for Lu Xueyuan and Liu Jiaying to have some interaction or even cooperation to rekindle the old friendship

But since I have just written the case, I have to let Lu Xueyuan continue to be confused.

Li Qian'er

Age: 17 years old

Identity: Lu Xueyuan's daughter, whose name is Li Guanxiong's niece, is actually his biological child

Qian'er's image has not been planned in general

When she appeared in the early stage, she was a bold and willful girl, but when she just fell into Li Guanxiong's hands, she only cared about the mediocre scenes and did not consider too much about her image.

The character Qian'er had a brief introduction in the early stage. She was bold and bold before and dared to provoke Li Guanxiong. She was not a docile and gentle girl. She was obviously scheming and unique, and she was a little pepper who dared to do things and act.

But after being caught, it was thin and lacked key renderings, so I gradually decided to enrich her character. Finally, I forced a few scenes of her flesh-hearted scenes to portray this character in the plot process to describe the character

The main direction of description is to make her degenerate on purpose after her psychological collapse, which is similar to Du Kexiu

As Li Guanxiong's biological daughter, she was raped and enslaved by her biological father. She was able to adjust her mentality by herself. This requires a strong mentality, so Qian'er must be strong

If there is room for play in the future, Qian'er will definitely not be the kind of character who will truly fall. If she gives her a chance, she will definitely rise up.

Therefore, Qian'er's final image was written and fixed, highlighting her scheming and adaptability, and even her natural means of confusing men.

In the later period, many readers are talking about the vilification of female characters. If a female character must be completely vilified at this time, my choice will be Qian'er, not Du Kexiu or others.

But after all, I didn't let Qian'er turn completely black. She is a very cute and beautiful girl, but she still can't bear to leave her.

Just lay a foreshadowing and leaving a tail for readers to make up for their imagination

Her final image is the author of positioning her as a tenacious beauty who uses her spirit and body as bargaining chips after collapse and despair, and strives to find a way out for life.

From Li Guanxiong's perspective, with Lao Li's character, even though he knew he was a daughter, his mentality towards Qian'er would only be more subtle, and he would never retreat or collapse.

Li Guanxiong is definitely not an ethical expert, but the opposite

I wrote this when Li Guanxiong broke Qian'er's place:

No! Please don’t! Lu Xueyuan cried, you can’t do this! She is your daughter! She is really your biological child...

Is that right? Li Guanxiong thrust hard, and his thick penis scraped through the tight vaginal wall, broke through Qian'er's hymen, and pushed into the deepest part of the virgin's vagina.

For readers of the mess, I think it has a certain impact.

After confirming that Qian'er is her own daughter, he will not stop asking for Qian'er's sexual intercourse, but he will definitely treat her more preferentially. Moreover, Qian'er has already won the opportunity to treat her with preferential treatment.

There is a difference between treating Qian'er, Lu Xueyuan and other women. This can be seen from the description of Lu Xueyuan's mother and daughter falling into his hands. Li Guanxiong also spent a lot of effort to make their mother and daughter submit, such as using the humiliating video of their relatives and friends to destroy their psychological defenses, etc.

So by the end of the book, Qian'er actually had a considerable initiative. Unless something big happens to anger Li Guanxiong (according to my description of Qian'er's personality, this is no longer possible), she should not be abused...

Anne

Age: 22 years old

Identity: An Lan's younger brother

Agen's character is a useless social scumbag. If he hadn't had such a sister or brother-in-law, he would not have survived an episode in any TV series.

Agen just writes about a mud that cannot be supported on the wall at all, it is rotten and bad

He is lustful, willful, ignorant, and acts recklessly. He has no ability to do things, and he does things regardless of the causes and consequences. His thoughts are dirty and his behavior is despicable.

It can only be said that Yang Tong was targeted by him as a person who had no cultivation in his previous life. If he had other bad guys with a little brain, the mother and daughter would not have become like this.

The book also explains the issue that Agen will anger Li Guanxiong in this way.

An Lan dared to protect her younger brother like this, so she naturally knew that her husband would not pay attention to this. Those who were doing things were basically not a problem with Lao Li, so she was too lazy to pay attention to it.

Besides, when he crossed the line too much, Lao Li also taught him a lesson.

Agen's ending actually started to lay the groundwork very early

Such a scumbag who is so angry that he will definitely not give him a good ending. Even if the author would rather be cheap, Yuan Xian would not be cheaper. Yuan Xian at least has some ability and a little loyalty.

So Agen died and his effect ended there. His remaining energy was to continue to trigger the following plot, namely Yang Dan's ending

Ou Zhentang

Age: over 50 years old

Identity: Chairman of Datong Yiyin Entertainment Communication Co., Ltd., Li Guanxiong's competitor

Ou Zhentang is an entrepreneur with ideals, means and ability. Although sometimes he is not as righteous as he appears, he is basically a good person with a sense of justice.

Unfortunately, such a person can only become a villain in such a novel

The motivation for writing Lao Ou is very simple. Anyone with a discerning eye can tell at a glance that it is to set up an opponent for Li Guanxiong to prevent Li Guanxiong from living too well, so as to promote the plot.

So Ou Zhentang's personal image was not deliberately created, but just tried to exaggerate a few strokes when writing about him

Ou Zhentang's methods of dealing with Li Guanxiong have been roughly written out, and the reason is also very simple: he doesn't want to dilute the main show, and the author avoids his shortcomings

Therefore, the business war plots are basically not written in detail, and it is not the author's excitement. The context of the writing process is that it will not be very complicated, just have a highlight.

Besides, I don't understand finance, so it's impossible to write in depth.

As for whether there are any flaws, there are most likely some. Friends who know how to do it don’t need to go into it.

I have also chosen to write down some other details about Lao Ou, such as the auditorium video incident. In fact, I have also conceived a more tortuous and meticulous process, how to shoot Du Lu'e's videos and how to replace the pillars to make Lao Ou's passionate clips open to the public, etc., but in the end I gave up

This is an erotic novel. There is no need to let those things take up too much space and my old man's brain. So all the twists and turns are CUT, and the result is directly the result, which may seem abrupt.

Lao Ou also used some disgraceful means in dealing with Li Guanxiong, which I think is normal

There is a saying, what methods do you need to deal with hooligans?

Of course I won't be gentle

And I have also hinted several times that Lao Ou also has a certain gangster background and at least a certain gangster connection.

Lao Ou received the lunch box a little quickly because the central plot was not on him. Lao Ou himself couldn't create a very good meat scene, so he wouldn't be entangled for too long.

After Ou Zhentang was imprisoned, he did consider letting another supporting role take over his class and continue to set an opposite for Li Guanxiong.

Su Nara, of course, he chose Su Nara, but in the end he felt it was unnecessary, so he told him about it after meeting Su Nara and Liu Jiaying.

Justice Xu, who later entered the main plot, can only be regarded as a vassal of Liu Jiaying's image, nor is he another big boss

Wu Yongnian

Age: over 20 years old

Identity: Ling Yunting's driver and lover

Xiao Nian actually didn't give him a special character, just simply fell in love with Ling Yunting and was willing to go through fire for her.

During the revision, he added a little story about his family feud to enrich the background of this character.

Overall, the existence and story of Xiaonian all serves Ling Yunting's character creation

Therefore, there are many speculations about whether Xiaonian is a double-faced spy during the serialization process, which is unnecessary. When the author wrote about Xiaonian and Ling Yunting's love, he used literary styles to show this point.

As for Ling Yunting’s feelings for Xiaonian…

Well, let's put it this way, Ling Yunting is a small boat floating in the wind and waves. As the "Chaos" sings, she is extremely eager to care, support, and also desire a soulmate, and this is the little new year that appears at the right time

If Xiaonian is regarded as a life-saving straw for her empty heart, I also think it is not bad.

The story is set. Yuan Xian didn't know Xiao Nian's life experience. Xiao Nian's mother was just a passerby who looked at Yuan Xian. Yuan Xian himself might not know her name and identity, so he would not associate her with Xiao Nian. He never dreamed that Xiao Nian's mother would be killed by herself and had a deep hatred.

So the reason why Xiao Nian resolutely rebelled was, one was because of her mother, and the other was because of Ling Yunting, family feud and love, had very good reasons...

What's more, even if Yuan Xian ruined his own future and insulted his beloved woman, even if he was for his own and Ling Yunting's future, he should have turned against him.

The author did not write Xiao Nian as a pure boy. His request for sexual desire was actually brought out by Yuan Xian, and he worked with Yuan Xian.

Let Xiao Nian play with other women, creating a dislocation of perverted pleasure, this dark mentality also seems to be quite eye-catching

Whether it is rape of Le Jingchan in front of Ling Yunting or having an affair with Liu Jiaying, you can satisfy your fantasy and enrich your character's image.

He is not a gentleman, never, and his love for Ling Yunting cannot really change his lustful nature

Little New Year is the only one who dies

I had conceived a plan before, let him and Le Jingchan stay together and find Ling Yunting together

But this ending is probably not pleasing and will be sweared to death

The more important reason is that this will definitely overthrow Le Jingchan’s fate setting, which is equivalent to overturning the overall structure of the character Le Jingchan.

So I had to let him die. In order to strengthen the tragic atmosphere of Ling Yunting's ending, it would be better to let him die tragically in front of Ling Yunting, so I have the current writing style.

Liu Han

Age: over 40 years old

Identity: Chief of Police

Liu Han is a pervert who has a perverted sexual habit and is domineering when he is in control. When he becomes a dog of a family, he racks his brains to restore his life.

In character creation, this is actually just a supporting role. His contribution to the meat scene is not as good as director Zhang Fengqi, whose cock is not very hard, and even better than Master Luo Shufu, who only starred in two meat scenes.

But after all, he is at the center of several important turning points in the book and plays a relatively important role in promoting him, so he has a relatively more description of him.

According to the description in the book, Liu Han died due to the careful design of Li Guanxiong. It not only made Li Guanxiong feel angry that his beloved wife was exposed, but also became the key piece to frame Ou Zhentang.

Anyway, this character is bound to die. Regardless of whether everyone likes An Lan or not, are you reading novels from the perspective of Li Guanxiong, this is a character who can't survive for two episodes. After living for so long, he has become a cheaper person.

However, the book describes how Li Guanxiong designed the plot. Those plots are too delayed and too tiring the author's brains, so I just want to tell the readers the result!

Feng Jie

Age: 19 years old

Identity: Yang Dan’s ex-boyfriend

Feng Jie's character is very simple. He is an ignorant boy who loves Yang Dan deeply. He is in a hot mind in the pain of intertwining love and hate. He is confused and does bad things under the temptation of bad people. Later, he becomes a chess piece that Li Guanxiong used Yang Dan to frame Liu Han into the trap.

In fact, the author did not pay attention to this character. His description of him was relatively rough and he almost discarded it after using it. His role was basically to promote the plot of Yang Dan's branch, and even the impact of Yang Dan's mental state was very little.

During the serialization process, although some readers have put forward some very good ideas about the character's heart and plot direction, they have not been adopted by the author. The reason is that they do not want to waste more writing on him. His distorted obsession with Yang Dan or Yang Dan's family is not the author's excitement and concern, but there is room for expansion.

If you really write a sequel or extra chapter in the future, it is not ruled out that Xiao Feng will come out to play the villain in the right situation.

The author of Feng Jie's ending was too lazy to describe it carefully, and only mentioned it in Yang Dan's plot.

It's really tragic for such a young man who racked his brains to do everything for Yang Dan and was falsely imprisoned to save Yang Dan, neither the author nor the Yang Dan gave him any sympathy.

Dragon support A, B, C, D

There are a lot of other names or names without names, most of which simply serve a certain scene or plot setting, so they are not listed one by one.

Appendix 2: Lyrics Collection

Another feature of "Shifting the Stars" is that the author wrote a lot of lyrics for the little beauties in the novel.

All these lyrics are original by the author, and they have put a lot of effort into writing.

Most of these lyrics are created to fit the image of female singers, and some lyrics even give certain symbolic meanings and even plot functions.

For example, everyone knows that "The Angel in the Cloud" is a representative song of Ling Yunting's image, so other female singers can also express their image in the music scene from their lyrics. The more songs they have, the richer they can express.

The way to play homemade lyrics is actually purely accidental

When I wrote about Angel in the Cloud at the beginning, I just scattered a few lines and didn't want anything. So in the old version, Ling Yunting only mentioned the title of the song, and at most one or two lyrics were compiled.

But when I wrote Danlu's "The Early Morning Expectations", especially Lin Zhaoxian's "The Lone", it was recognized by many readers. I also felt that since I was a singer, there was a lot of articles to do in their songs, so when I re-revised, the lyrics were greatly increased, and the plot function and symbolic meaning of the song were added. Some of the original names only appeared in the songs and also filled in the lyrics.

I didn't expect that writing lyrics would be addictive. I didn't want to write anything when I first added the lyrics. I didn't write the complete lyrics of "The Jade Girl Diary" and "The Red Pink Girl" I wrote when I was just re-edited.

Until I wrote Ling Yunting's two songs "Love in White Diamond Ring" and "The Snow Day" at the same time, I felt that the lyrics and themes and lyrics and words were quite satisfactory. I even confirmed the way to write every sentence in these two songs.

What I wrote before may be two sentences and one scheming, but the rhymes are not strict, but the rhymes I wrote next are very careful with the rhymes

When I was writing lyrics, when I determined the rhyme, I sometimes even found out all the commonly used words of the rhyme and found the appropriate words to enter the words one by one.

Especially in the later "Cicada Word", which Ling Yunting expressed his heart, is a word-by-word thinking, and it takes a lot of energy.

At the end of the book, I sorted out all the lyrics to make it easier for readers to search

These lyrics are also a by-product of the author's compliment when writing "The Transformation of Hands". Friends who like it can recall it, and those who are not interested can skip it now!

(1) Ling Yunting's "Angelo in the Clouds"

Embrace me, the beautiful world, the bright flowers, the clear springs, the vast land, the green mountains, and the handsome young man

The fairy who is about to descend to earth is looking at and looking forward to it

Integrate into your arms and exude my fragrance

The fairy who is about to descend to earth is flying!

Note:

This is Ling Yunting’s debut and famous work, and it is also the representative song of her image. It is the first main song of her first album "Liaofan Ling Yunting"

The author gave this song a high status and mentioned it repeatedly throughout the book. It was not only selected as the top ten golden songs of the year, but also won the Best Golden Songs.

This song is indeed just randomly written. At that time, I just thought it would be smoother to start the whole book with a few lyrics, because it was written as a female singer, and it could be immediately changed into the scene of Ling Yunting's Nuhua serving, creating an image gap

The lyrics did not take too much consideration, only eight simple sentences, which are relatively poor in quality, and are completely incomparable to the lyrics that carefully refined the words later.

But due to the setting in the book, this is a big popular song by Ling Yunting. Ling Yunting's image is an angel in the clouds or an angel in Luo Fan. Therefore, this song has been mentioned repeatedly in the book, including when the concert was held, Yuan Xian also asked to use this song as the opening song.

Whenever this song is mentioned in the book, the intention is usually very obvious, which is to emphasize the image of Ling Yunting, a pure jade girl with a fairy spirit.

This is also the main role of this song in the whole book

(2) Ling Yunting's "Heat Youth"

In summer, the charm of youth is leaping, and the heat of youth is shining...

Note:

This is the second main song of Ling Yunting's first album "Liaofan's Ling Yunting"

Because in the past, singers usually posted records, most of them were made up of fast songs and slow songs, so Ling Yunting also matched a fast song and set this song as a youth dance song, which made it a hot summer campus, making it a top ten golden songs of the year.

However, this song only wrote two lyrics perfunctorily in the old version. The main reason why this song was not supplemented during revision is that according to the timeline of the story, "Heat Youth" was an old song from two or three months ago at the beginning, and there was no plot function arranged. It is rarely mentioned in the book.

(III) Ling Yunting's "Pastoral Orphan"

(No lyrics)

Note:

This song is the third main song of Ling Yunting's first album "Lu Fan Ling Yunting". It is also the top song. When Ling Yunting and Lin Zhaoxian were in fierce confrontation, they were also mentioned many times.

In the old version, there were only such song titles randomly. At that time, Ling Yunting was still considering her pure and vivid image?

But this song was not made up for two lyrics like "Heat Youth"

During the revision, this song was not placed in a more important position, nor did it design the plot of Ling Yunting singing this song, so he did not continue to write the lyrics.

If you really write the lyrics, you may be able to use the scenery to describe people, blue sky, white clouds, green fields, and naive and purity of the heroine. You either have a noble self-satisfaction, or yearn for freedom or love.

(4) Ling Yunting's "Love Time"

If the love is so strong, then the sky collapses in front of you and the earth breaks in front of you?

Note:

This song should have been mentioned only once, and it is also the main song in Ling Yunting's first album "Lu Fan's Ling Yunting"

When writing at that time, it should have been made up temporarily to describe Ling Yunting's mood at that time. It was also considered that Ling Yunting's first record should have a love song, so I took it casually.

Because other plot functions are not given, there are no lyrics added during revision.

(5) Ling Yunting's "Diary of the Jade Girl"

The crystal stamens are wavy, and the silver bottle is growing in the deep boudoir

Please don’t peek at Jade Matter, my body is like a white chrysanthemum and my heart is a icy!

Note:

This is the title song of the same name of Ling Yunting's second album "The Diary of the Jade Girl", and it can also be regarded as the second representative song of Ling Yunting's image.

The book has a certain amount of description of how this song went from being neglected when it was released to becoming popular, which also made it one of the top ten golden songs of the year

There was no lyrics for this song in the old version. Even I think the title of this song is really bad. I don’t know how to start when writing the lyrics. I even considered changing the title when re-revising it.

But from the perspective of trying to keep it the same, I left the title of the song

Because this song has a high positioning and a high appearance rate, I decided to add lyrics

"The Diary of the Jade Girl" and Lin Zhaoxian's "The Pink Girl" are written at the same time. When the revision was first revised, I didn't plan to write the lyrics too thoroughly, so both songs only wrote one section of the text.

These four lyrics are simple and express one's own steadfastness. It is because we did not find a better way to describe the title of the song at that time.

During the serialization, I mentioned that all the lyrics in the book are original except for "The Diary of the Jade Girl".

It's not surprising that I couldn't find that old Hong Kong song, because the age is so long

Let's announce the answer now: It is the interlude "Green Water Love Waves" of the first long Jin Yong drama "Book and Sword" filmed by TVB in 1976. It was composed by Gu Jiahui, written by Lu Guozhan and sung by Liza Wang. It is an interlude that Chen Jialuo (played by Cheng Shaoqiu) sang through Princess Xiangxiang (played by Yu An'an) when she first met Princess Xiangxiang (played by Yu An'an) who was bathing in the river. The song is quite nice. Friends who are interested can search.

The lyrics are as follows:

The valley is infinitely beautiful, the fragrant flowers on all sides are made into curtains, long reeds are lightly covering, and the green waves are sent to the heart and water reflect me intrigue. The flowers bloom in full bloom, and the butterflies are peeping at the eyes and are deliberately unceremonious!

The butterfly is still making false claims, you are peeping with intention, the butterfly should know the etiquette, I am like a white chrysanthemum, my heart is like a orchid, my heart is like an orchid! The meaning of the voyeurism in "The Diary of the Jade Girl" mainly borrows the meaning of the voyeurism and the metaphor of the last sentence

(Six) Ling Yunting's "On the Day of Heavy Snow"

On the day of heavy snow, the north wind penetrates the curtains

Snowflakes outside the window, I was frozen and I haven't been sleeping all night

On the day of heavy snow, your face appears

We have been walking side by side, walking side by side, watching each other in the snow without getting tired of it

Goodbye, this romantic snowy day, please take away my memories every minute

Even if my love remains unchanged, I can't recall your vicissitudes of life

Why not let this endless thought turn into courage to fill my heart

Only then can I step forward, even if I don’t see the mandarin ducks, I will never envy the immortals!

Note:

This is the second title song of Ling Yunting's second album "The Diary of the Jade Girl", and it is actually still a representative song of Ling Yunting's image.

The steadfast girl in this song is written in a gentle outside and hard inside, and her heart is tender but strong and progressive. It is my summary of the image of Ling Yunting in the whole book.

If "The Angel in the Cloud" describes appearance, then "The Diary of the Jade Girl" and "The Day of Heavy Snow" focus on the inner world

"On the Day of Snow" is a song that has not been mentioned in the old version, and it is a completely new addition during revision.

At that stage of the plot, I focused a lot on Ling Yunting's music scene and needed a title song, which was between "The Diary of the Jade Girl" and "The White Diamond Ring", so I decided to write an extra song.

The idea at the beginning was to write a love song. After all, love songs are the most mainstream in the pop music scene. As a top traffic singer, it is impossible to have no love songs. Many songs written for Ling Yunting at that time were not considered love songs.

But I didn't expect that as I wrote, I still went back to the path of inspirational songs. Even if it was still considered a love song, I could only use love to express my aspirations.

This song is written almost at the same time as "Love in White Diamond Ring", which allows the author to experience the fun of writing characters through lyrics for the first time.

The last eight consecutive sentences of "The Snow Day" were completed in one go. The lyrical sentences with stacked rhythm and gradual advancement are the most satisfying part of the author.

(7) Ling Yunting's "Love in White Diamond Ring"

The colorful streets are covered with the sunset, and the drums are resounding throughout the colorful world

Happy songs come one after another, ushering in the brightest moon in this life

The white diamond ring ring on the ring finger, embracing each other's everything

The two hearts are closely connected from now on, not fantasy but true!

The glittering white diamond ring reflects your purity than snow

Let this glittering white diamond ring engrave the eternal romance and harmony between you and him

Wear a white diamond ring and ask him to write happily for the rest of his life

Happiness is not just a white diamond ring, but also a sweet and sweet one forever

Note:

This is the third main song of Ling Yunting's second album "The Diary of the Jade Girl"

According to the book, this should have been the second main feature, but because he wanted to present a gift to the bride at Li Guanxiong's wedding, he delayed it as the third main feature.

The book also gave a high status in this song. Not only did it make a big fuss when it was first broadcast, but the subsequent text also emphasized the popularity of this song many times, so that this song must be played at many weddings of that year and was selected as one of the top ten golden songs of the year.

On the one hand, of course, it is a description of Ling Yunting's popularity, and on the other hand, it is naturally a bit selfish, because the lyrics of this song are the ones that the author thinks he is more satisfied with.

"Love in White Diamond Ring" is a song mentioned several times in the old version. The song title should have been randomly mentioned at that time, and I didn't consider what songs I could write with this kind of song. It seems to be the way to a love-breaking song.

When revising, the lyrics of this song need to be written, and finally it was written into a wedding hymn. I think it is a perfect solution.

The lyrics of "Love in White Diamond Ring" rewrite the sweet feeling and warm atmosphere, and are written into a quick song

Especially in the interweaving of long and short sentences in the chorus, it is a sense of rhythm that I deliberately want to create.

If you give this song a soundtrack, it should obviously be a festive atmosphere with loud gongs and drums, with a light and compact rhythm.

(8) Ling Yunting "Waiting for You to Go Home"

Big red lanterns hang high on the street, and the breeze blows through the flowers everywhere

Thousands of tender buds grow in the stamens, and no one can fall down

The mother on the sickbed dreamed of her baby again

Remember the sounds you were learning to speak, hoping to help you get married in a sedan chair

I wonder if you are far away from the world and are waiting for you to return to your home

How many spring and summer are you talking about fate, and you will always be concerned about it forever

I hope one day I will ride the sunset and gather together to enjoy the whole family.

Note:

This is the first song of Ling Yunting's third album "The Sound of Heaven", and it is the interlude of Ling Yunting's first movie "The Love Font Chasing Order"

The old version did not provide interludes for the movie. When re-revised, I thought that since I decided to write more lyrics, it would be unreasonable for big singers to act in movies without a few movie songs. Moreover, Ling Yunting's new record was still early during that period, and she also needed to have a song that showed her presence. So this song was created.

In that movie, Le Jingchan and Ling Yunting played two sisters who were separated since childhood, so the focus of the episode is on sisterly affection, and the intention is to sing the mother's longing for her lost daughter through Ling Yunting's mouth.

The final quality of the lyrics, I think, is relatively average, and does not achieve the effect I expected

In fact, while writing this lyrics, I also considered adding another theme song to the movie, but as the plot progressed, I found that there was no room for another movie song to play, so I stopped.

When Ling Yunting starred in the second movie "The City Beauty", she also thought about the interlude, but at that stage, Ling Yunting's new album was released and was hyping up "The Sound of Heaven" and "Chaos". There seemed to be no room for new songs to be described, so she gave up.

Looking back, it would be fine if Ling Yunting and Lin Zhaoxian were asked to sing a song at that stage, but it is not bad now, so it would be better for them to keep regrets.

(9) Ling Yunting's "The Sound of Heaven"

The starry sky is endless, the moon reflects the water and the light leaps gold

Look at the sparkling waves, the night dew wet my clothes

The sky and the earth are hidden in the night, the wind and insects are ringing with me

Ask me, have you ever understood the sound of nature through ancient and modern times?

The sounds in my ears are sometimes far and sometimes near. When will I send a reply from outside the sky?

Did you leave your footprints in a hurry?

Do you record the smile and frown in the world?

Did it once look like I hugged my knees and murmured?

Can you see through the joys and hardships of life?

Can you sleep well if you go through troubles?

Can you let the lyre I play in the past eternal period?

Note:

This is the actual title song of Ling Yunting's third album "The Sound of Heaven". The setting of this song is also described in the book in detail. It has a high style and is actually suspected of being high and low. I am afraid it is not easy to become popular. The record company also hesitated and decided to feature this song.

Therefore, the lyrics of this song are deliberately written in a relatively spacious and grand manner, and the artistic conception is as high as possible.

You can also see that it is obviously borrowing from the form of "Tianwen" and asking questions by yourself.

Whether three can be used in a row, the final ending is still Ling Yunting's confusing state of mind at that stage

The lyrics also try to get a little fairy spirit, let the heroine of the song sit on the sand dune with her knees in her arms, looking at the stars in the distance to the lake, deliberately creating a cool image, which is in line with Ling Yunting's angel style, and also wants to profile her soul noble

Another main function of this song is to enhance Ling Yunting's performance as a pop idol singer, so that she can perfectly perform such a difficult song to sing. The sound of nature is capable of making a song that is not like a pop slutty song with her own abilities and popularity. She can make a song that is not like a pop slutty song popular

So, even though the song had a poor grade on the rankings at the beginning, I finally let it climb to the top of the list step by step. The purpose is to show that Ling Yunting is no longer just a youth idol, but an excellent singer

(10) Ling Yunting's "Chaos"

She stood in the boundless fog, for thousands of years

She looked at the faint light from afar, and it had been many days

She is used to hiding in the dark and groping with the changes of heaven and earth

She doesn't understand the changes in seasonal climate, just because it's an endless and eternal winter!

She walked towards that ray of light, and every step she took, dancing gracefully

She longs for more light and yearns for the lingering and tossing and turning in the world.

She stood in the chaos where the world had not opened, and she always burst into tears.

She waited for Pangu's giant axe to slash out the surging and brilliant light

However, her eyes that grew in the dark, I don't know if they can see them.

Note:

This is an additional song added to Ling Yunting's third album "The Sound of Heaven". When the record production was basically completed, the record was remade because of the song composed and lyrics by Ling Yunting himself.

The story is set up. This song has become Ling Yunting's most famous masterpiece, and has dominated the list for several months. Even though Li Guanxiong's company was surrounded by rumors of huge scandals, the song just shook slightly and stood firm.

Therefore, this song largely represents Ling Yunting's achievements in the music scene, and I also made it the best golden song of the year

The lyrics of "Chaos" were actually written in 2006, and no word has been changed

Chapter specifically describing Ling Yunting's creation of this song Commemoration of Chaos Originally ranked in Episode 44, it belongs to the part that has been written but has not yet been published publicly. It was integrated into Episode 36 when revised. The Seal of Chaos

The original intention of writing this song is very clear, which is to make Ling Yunting's song play a greater role in the plot and even directly promote the plot development.

I mentioned many times in the early stage that I want the lyrics to play a greater role, and even directly trigger the plot, which refers to "Chaos"

Therefore, I have also designed many plots around the song "Chaos", such as Lin Zhaoxian and Yang Dan, who re-reached Ling Yunting through this song, and triggered their next plot

I have carefully changed to the two original works of Ling Yunting, "Chaos" and "Cicada Words", to write about her motivation and process of creation. While giving these two songs more important plot functions, I also describe Ling Yunting's mood and ambition.

Although those passages do not have any flesh-and-hearted scenes, they are all heavy pens describing Ling Yunting's image. The author himself wrote them very carefully.

The theme of "Chaos" is very clear, it is an inspirational song. As Lin Zhaoxian and Yang Dan heard, the girl in the song groping in the dark is extremely eager to embrace the light.

Although this yearning for light is confused but firm, Lin Zhaoxian and Yang Dan, who understand music, both deeply believe that what they hear is Ling Yunting's true heart voice

The design of "Chaos" was originally like "The Sound of Heaven" and was not a popular song of saliva.

But I made this work created by Ling Yunting popular throughout the society and sang it to the streets and alleys. This is a writing style that can even be said to be a positive description of Ling Yunting's popularity.

If the previous song "The Sound of Heaven" focuses more on Ling Yunting's singing skills, this song obviously highlights her creative ability. I want to write Ling Yunting as an all-round contestant, amplify her talent from all angles, and try to write her more perfectly.

(11) Ling Yunting's "Singing on the Cloud Cliff"

The mountain on the top of the cloud cliff is high and the road is steep. Step on the clouds and walk lightly

The vast clouds and mist are high and thick, and you can't see through the deep valley.

Standing on the cloud cliff, waiting alone, years and months disappear to describe thinness

When will the jade rabbit meet in the bamboo forest? Let's make an appointment to stay together every night

I want to take off the stars in the sky and fly into the sky to show my jade throat

Sing the tenderness of the world, fly freely to the other end of the sky

Songs surround the red building of the Painted Pavilion, but I want to cleanse my worries and sorrows

This world is long and I can run around by stepping on the cage

Please look at the seagulls in the sky, why do you need Noah's ark to fight the waves alone?

But even if I have a rough meal and clothing, I have my leisurely universe

I would rather be a mud pig and a leper than a puppet!

Note:

Although this is the fourth main song of Ling Yunting's third album "The Sound of Heaven", according to the plot in the book, this song was originally the first main song of the record, but was successively sent to the queue by "Waiting for You to Go Home" and "Chaos", and was successfully tested by "The Sound of Heaven" and squeezed into the fourth song of the record's Plate List.

The song in the plot is designed to increase the thickness of the record "Tianlai". After all, it is a crazy selling record. Excellent title songs must have sufficient quantity and quality.

On the other hand, it is also emphasized that the style of this record is so noble and refined. It is not only integrated with "The Sound of Heaven" but also with "Chaos" that was added without plans.

Making these cool works a hit is the main purpose of my writing of the album "Tianlai"

The theme of "Singing in the Cloud Cliff" is to yearn for freedom, which is Ling Yunting's voice at that stage. The last sentence is to be a mud pig and a leper dog rather than a puppet to pull a thread. It is a summary, so after all, this is still an inspirational song that secretly expresses the feelings. Among the lyrics I wrote for Ling Yunting, there are the most such songs. I have many ideas about Ling Yunting's character creation, and actually they are integrated into the lyrics.

The first words confirmed in "Singing in the Cloud Cliff" are the last two sentences, and I feel quite good about myself.

The problem is that the previous text is a bit too imaginative, and it is a bit unmatched with the yelling that expresses one's heart in the end.

But no matter what, I wrote this lyrics quite well. After finding the rhymes, I found that there were too many suitable words to use. Soon I came up with gentleness, sorrow, waiting for common words such as this, combining the theme and the scene of Yunya, the steep road, the steep road, the universe, and even the logical relationship between the seagull and the ark has been thought about how to write it.

The result is precisely because there are too many words accumulated, many sentences have been formed, but they cannot bear to choose, which affects the pattern of the whole word.

(12) Ling Yunting's "Cicada Words"

Born to be without a strong bones, eating withered and sucking with rotten, always like dung

Joy and joy are as if nothing is left, and the body is in the quagmire.

The walking corpse was a mistake in his life, and he was a servant and a slave, and he also attracted jealousy.

There is no one to tell you about confusion, and the road ahead is gone in vain

The bees and butterflies are flying around me so much that I hope to flap my wings and dance together

The turbid air and filthy land are not the destination. No matter how humble or humble it is, you should have ambitions to soar into the sky!

One day, the shell will be removed and the bones will be replaced. The snow will be gone. The past will be humiliated.

Crank up and shout, walk on the top of the branch, not remembering the origin of the hero

Looking from a high place, singing and writing in the wind, drinking the dew every day!

Note:

According to the plot in the book, this song originally written by Ling Yunting and arranged by Xiao Nian has not been officially recorded, but was only sung in public at Ling Yunting's concert.

But with Ling Yunting's disappearance, the song was hyped up by the powerful power of fans without any publicity. It was ranked first in the Duo Zhou charts and was selected as one of the top ten golden songs of the year without any publicity.

This is naturally emphasizing Ling Yunting's extremely high popularity and her supreme image in the public's minds after Li Guanxiong's escape

If "Chaos" expresses desire and yearning, then this song "Cicada Word" is expressing the determination to fight to the end. I simply want to write it as a battle manifesto

When Xiao Nian, who understands music, naturally understood Ling Yunting's state of mind, they dared to tell each other honestly.

Therefore, the original intention of writing "Cicada Words" is like "Chaos". It not only portrays Ling Yunting's voice, but also gives it certain plot-driven functions.

"Cicada Words" connects Ling Yunting and Le Jingchan. Xiaonian's wishes are different from the focus of "Chaos"

This is the lyrics I have written most energy-intensively after revision. The rhetorical techniques and metaphor methods are clear at a glance. It is also obvious to use a few ancient poems about cicadas to express their feelings. Needless to say,

The most important thing is to use words and sentences. Many good sentences and words are abandoned because they are not closely posted with the theme, which is completely different from when writing "Song of Yun Cliff".

The short sentences used in the chorus are not for the sense of rhythm, but for the sense of classicality.

With "Cicada Word", Ling Yunting's decisive sword at Li Guanxiong was brought to the ending part of Ling Yunting's desire to survive while struggling with the idea of ​​life and death.

Ling Yunting, who wrote this kind of song, is not afraid of death, but she is not willing to die worthlessly.

I want to write that she has a relatively tough willpower, but when it comes to the ending part, her body has partially sunk, and it seems that her willpower willpower willpower inevitably become weaker

This is actually not my original intention, but the image and mentality of the characters will develop, so I don’t force it.

(Thirteen) Danlu Girl "The Early Morning Expectations"

Say goodbye to the dew of last night and step onto the sunny morning. The people in the mirror are tidying their makeup

Put on red hairpins, wear red clothes, bright people in the middle of the mirror

Yesterday’s gift was a green backpack. I took it from him and my heart was rippling. What would my expectations look like today?

Is it a rose? It's a corsage?

Or the magnolia that I dream of?

Why not give me a kiss gently, kiss on my face warms my heart, if I give me a kiss gently, kiss away my sorrow and kiss my heart

Just wait for you--

Give me a kiss again, the flying tears will not fall on my clothes again, I would like to give you a thousand kisses deeply, I would like to kiss you day and night

Would you like to wait for my good news?

Note:

This is the debut work of Danlu girl group and the title song of their first album "Expected Danlu"

Because the plot requires it, this song became very popular once it was released, making the Danlu group famous quickly

This song is a song already in the old version. In fact, those who are interested may be able to see that the style of writing lyrics is different from those written after revision. For example, if there is no rhyme every sentence, the tendency of using words to select characters is also different.

This lyrics were also recognized by many friends at that time, and also enhanced my confidence in continuing to write lyrics in large quantities.

"The Early Morning Expectations" is the first work of the beautiful girl group. The style is naturally more girlish and as cute as possible, so the longing for love is an old-fashioned but practical way to write.

From the lyrics, we can see that the style of this song is relatively light, and even I am thinking about it myself. I just wait for you to give me a kiss again... The two beautiful girls' crisp and sweet singing and the light and elegant dance postures are all over the place.

(14) Danlu Girl's Love in the Clouds

The clouds all over the sky, the clouds all over the sky condense my love

I walk deep in the white clouds, and bright wild flowers are planted everywhere

Standing in the clouds, the breeze blows, and the warm breeze comes towards you

The people on the clouds laugh happily, laughing at the helplessness of the world

The white horse's hooves tread on the clouds, looking at the sky from afar, I open my arms, the sound of horse's hooves arrives, the young man on the horse is no longer in the world

Clever love will never be renewed, and all the elegies and crying will be thrown out of the sky

Today's people's hearts are blooming, and the young man's wreath is worn by me

We will play together at the end of the sky, and the two little Yiyi will undoubtedly guess

The world embraces each other forever, and there is too much sorrow in the world!

Note:

This is the second title song of Danlu Girls' first record "Expected Danlu", which completely continues the style of "The Early Morning Expectations"

Since "The Promise of Morning" is a new work, Danlu's popularity is rising, so it is set as their second title song to become truly popular. Lianzhuang's top ranking and was selected as the top ten golden songs of the year

"Love in the Cloud" is also a lyric that has been found in the old version, and the same word has not been changed.

When I first wrote this lyrics, I actually had the feeling of "Angel in the Clouds". I remember that my idea was to let Danlu take advantage of Ling Yunting's popularity in publicity strategies, and in character descriptions, I should also intend to make Danlu's image move closer to Ling Yunting.

Of course, when I revisited, I deliberately distinguished Danlu's image from Ling Yunting, and my ideas were different.

Judging from the lyrics itself alone, "Love in the Cloud" actually has few highlights, but it is not as good as "The Expectations in the Morning"

In any case, I am singing the girl’s longing for love, and it’s a light dance song. This song goes directly to the prince charming. I want to complain about it myself haha!

"The Morning Expectations" is more realistic and delicate, while the longing of "Love in the Clouds" is a bit illusory

In summary, "The Early Morning Expectations" and "Love in the Cloud" both describe the girl's love for spring. This lyrics are obviously also about the Danlu combination developing towards the idol.

(15) Danlu Girl "One Listening to Autumn Voice"

The autumn wind swept through the green ground, and the yellow leaves on the branches are shaking

The whole person is alone, why not keep your mind here every year

The autumn is filled with Autumn and watch the flowing water, the fallen leaves are hard to wash away the filthy

Looking up at the yellow leaves hanging down on the tree, where can I take the prescription to keep my nobleness?

The earth falls in piles of leaves, the sunlight reflects a moment of golden light

Perhaps pieces of them accompany each other, even if they return to the dust together, it is better than being blown by the cold wind alone.

The leaves's reluctance finally melted into ashes in the mud (all falling into ashes)

The moon is full and the moon is declining. Who can I have in my heart (who else can I have)?

The vows will be destroyed once, and who will be drunk with the past youth? I will regret it in the breeze with the autumn leaves floating in the wind (I hope I will never regret it again in the next life)

Note:

This is the title song of the same name for Danlu Girls' second album "Autumn Sound". The author has also deliberately changed his style. It is very different from "The Early Morning Expectations" and "Love in the Clouds" in the first album. It no longer creates the image of a beautiful girl.

According to the plot needs, the performance of this song is also very average. The plot is designed so that fans do not accept this style change and have never been able to reach the top three in the rankings, which is in sharp contrast to Ling Yunting's frequent dominance of the list.

Of course, the lyrics should be written in line with the plot. When Yang Dan and Zhang Luning start to have a rift, the arrangement of the song will naturally keep up.

So the arrangement of this song is basically sung by Yang Dan, Zhang Luning and music dance together, throwing a time bomb to Dan Lu's conflict. The author deliberately arranged this, and the intention was very obvious.

The style of this song became bleak and the atmosphere was very deserted, which was completely different from the lively "The Early Morning Expectations" and "Love in the Clouds".

In addition to the problems with the integration of Danlu and the two, I also want to express that their careers have also reached a certain turning point.

The lyrics are actually in mind. Because I have written a bunch of lyrics, it seems that there are no real love songs, especially the most common love songs in popular songs.

The previous "Snow Day" has changed its focus as it was written, so I wanted to rewrite one, but at the end of this song, it seems that the focus has still gone astray, um!

In terms of the lyrics themselves, the author of this poem is quite satisfied with it. The rendering of the scene and the fluency of the words are relatively good. This rhyme is actually very useful, but it is very easy to use here.

The chorus part (excluding the harmony) was written more than ten years ago, and belongs to the completed but not officially released.

(16) Danlu Girl "Love Yourself"

The curling smoke rises in the sky, the sky is high and the sea is vast and the eyes are full of green green

Wipe your eyes and don’t let your tears drop. There are more beauty in the world (I want to find beauty in the world)

Maybe the reunion is not expected, but I don't want to mention it anymore

Although yesterday fascinated me, what benefits will it be if I was tired and sad (I understand that it is useless)?

I want to love myself well (I want to love myself), so why bother to miss you (not waiting for you anymore)

Fate is not allowed to be dependent on each other (see each other), and you will be separated forever with a smile (see each other forever)

Note:

This is the second main song of Danlu Girls' second record "Autumn Sound". It is positioned in the book. In fact, the record company's expectations for this song are far less than those of "Autumn Sound Sound Sound", but because of Yang Dan's sudden illness, he unexpectedly rushed to the top of the list.

This is another love song that the author was unwilling to accept and tried, but it still deviated from the track of the love song. I was speechless.

Judging from the content of the song, it is actually closer to Ling Yunting's "On the Day of Heavy Snow"

However, when I wrote this lyrics, I didn't spend much energy. I was confused by the complex plot conflicts. I was actually a bit perfunctory. When I wrote the lyrics, I focused more on the role distribution of Danlu and the possible situations that might occur when Yang Dan performed.

This is a relatively ordinary song written later.

(17) Lin Zhaoxian's "Pink Girl"

Time flies, let’s look at the present day, and the feelings of the past have not changed in the slightest

Who ever said that beauty is easy to grow old?

Who doesn’t pity youth?

Even if I have experienced all the troubles in the world, no matter the scars on my body, my face will be filled with red and pink.

I just look at the flowers and plants in the world. After the verdant past, I will sway in the wind. Who is as good as me in the waves?

Note:

This is Lin Zhaoxian's last award-winning golden song, and it can also be said to be the last glorious identity of Lin Zhaoxian's queen of status as the queen of the world.

According to the book's setting, this song is also a song created by Lin Zhaoxian himself. Like the same period "The Jade Girl Diary", "The Red Pink Girl" is also written as an autobiographical inspirational song by the singer.

The old version only mentioned the song title, but did not write the lyrics. At that time, the song title was actually a more erotic content.

During the revision, Lin Zhaoxian's story was considered and written in what she is now

The mentality at that time was actually similar to writing "The Diary of the Jade Girl". The two songs were written almost at the same time, and neither of them completed the whole article, and only wrote the climax part.

There is no review of Lin Zhaoxian's previous glorious details in the book, and her glory and heroism are only reflected in such a song.

In terms of the lyrics, I want to reflect the confidence and domineeringness of the queen in the music industry, so as to compare her embarrassment after she fell into the trap.

Therefore, although he is no longer young, his mentality is still the main focus when writing this lyrics

(18) Lin Zhaoxian's "Ling on the Roof"

Spring is gone, leaning alone on the railing and tears are surging

Tears are pouring, and smiles are strong

Looking up, there are carved buildings and painted buildings

Where to find your trace in the past

A glory lasts for ten years of dreams

The dream is empty, the woman leans on her own and she bursts into tears

In the eyes of pavilions and towers, how can the beautiful scenery come and go in a hurry

Miss you every night, north, west and east

Yesterday, the orioles sang and laughed frequently, and today I looked at the red sunset

What's the use of vows? Only the spring flowers and autumn moons are there to accompany me.

I can't be with you in this life, and the dream of yellow beams is sent with the wind

Time never waits for beauty to grow old, but I hope you can share with you in the next life

The fallen flowers and flowing water passes away, but the years pass by like the wind!

Note:

This is the title song of Lin Zhaoxian's last record

According to the description in the book, this is a record that she created and released almost all of her own investment, but under the influence of a huge scandal, her results were bleak.

This song is a lyric written in the old version that I spent the most effort. It was written in Lin Zhaoxian's mood at that time. I am quite satisfied with it and received praise from many readers back then.

It is precisely because of this that I feel that there is great potential in terms of lyrics, which gave rise to the idea of ​​using lyrics to directly promote the development of the plot. This is why "Chaos" and many new lyrics written after revision.

The whole lyrics of this song lamented the disappearance of spring, which obviously borrowed the tone of Song lyrics. I remember that I seemed to have read Li Yu's works several times to experience that artistic conception, so the traces of the last subject in the lyrics are quite obvious.

But now it seems that this poem seems to be a bit too much axe mark

For Lin Zhaoxian, although this song has poor grades, it is her blood-wrenching work, a work that embodies her full of grief and anger, with different meanings

A plot was designed later, using her filming the movie "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" to make the song popular for a while, implicitly writing about the ups and downs of her hope for life.

This is actually the first lyric in the book that directly promotes the development of the plot. For example, Li Guanxiong fell in love with Lin Zhaoxian when watching Lin Zhaoxian sing this work. Later, Ling Yunting also expressed her appreciation for this song and sang this song specifically with Lin Zhaoxian at her final concert.

(19) Zhang Luning's "Bright Avenue"

Walking onto the Golden Avenue, surging waves behind you

Facing the sunshine, a bright future is created with my hands

Kick the past down and sing loudly and proudly

Holding a broken shield spear in hand, smiling at thousands of faces, sarcastically mocking each other

Stepping onto the Golden Avenue, spreading your arms to say hello to the sun

Break through the prison of fate and race against time towards dreams

Say goodbye to the hustle and bustle of the world and announce my good news to the world

Please be my guide to the sunshine, take big steps to write my lifelong pride

Note:

"The Avenue of Blessings" is Zhang Luning's first song after she went solo. It has good results and has received praise from the public.

Because she successfully went solo and became the new queen of the music industry, her songs were naturally selected as one of the top ten golden songs of the year.

This song is a bold and inspirational song on the surface, but when I wrote this poem, I thought it was to be very proud and feel that I finally felt proud after a long period of suppression. The irony in it is self-evident.

It not only makes Zhang Luning proud when singing, but also makes Yang Dan feel the bitterness when he hears this song.

The lyrics themselves are actually average. They have not been entangled in this lyrics for too much energy and can only write the meaning out, but have not considered it too much in the words and sentences.

What's funny is that the song is named "The Great Road of the Blessings", but the author himself always recorded it as "The Great Road of the Sun", so that he wrote several mistakes in the article, and found it in the review before the post. I hope there is no omission.

(20) "Heart and liver move for you"

The red lips like fire move for you

Small waist, move for you

The beauty's heart of spring is moving for you

Do you see the clever and exquisite body?

Do you understand that your heart is lonely and empty?

Be careful, why don’t you appreciate this exquisiteness?

Why don’t you comfort her lonely void?

Without you, who can share the good night?

Come on, please meet

Red lips, slender waist, and tenderness. If you belong to you, don’t let it blow with the wind!

Her body and mind are moving for you!

Note:

This song was originally intended to be the title song of Ling Yunting's second album. The record producer changed Ling Yunting's image as a jade girl and made her show off, but because she was too sexy, she was rejected by Li Guanxiong, which led to the previous style "The Diary of the Jade Girl" which continued the previous style.

This lyrics are available in the old version. It is the most perfunctory lyrics written in the whole book. It is basically written in one breath, and I am too lazy to think about the words.

The story triggered by this song is that Ling Yunting couldn't sing this kind of slutty, and was subjected to aphrodisiacs by Yuan Xian's vagina. Finally, Chunxiang was in love with Xiao Nian one-night stand. The consequence was that An Lan's ass was damaged and Xiao Nian was deposed.

This can also be regarded as a precedent for the song to promote the plot.

"Heart and Healing for You" was not included in any record, and only appeared twice as a erotic song in the future.

In fact, Ling Yunting has been officially recorded in this song, and I also considered whether to make this song public later.

But the final direction of the plot is that Ling Yunting has become a hero of the whole nation and does not want to create any troubles, so I won’t mention this erotic song

Otherwise, since "Cicada Words" can be made public, the seriously recorded "Heart and Liver Move for You" can naturally be, and there are good stories to play.