Chapter 444 Second Lesson

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Qingwu greets Master.Xiao Qingwu was hanging on his chest and said helplessly: It is inconvenient to be full of courtesy, so please don’t blame me.

Xue Mu almost laughed: Qingwu, you are becoming more and more interesting now, you can consider writing jokes.

It's just because I face my master.Xiao Qingwu said intimately that she even gave you a bellyband, what else can you shrink? She is not so cheerful when facing others.

Xue Mu asked: Are you here to hand in your homework?

Yes, I went to give Ji Qingyuan a regular treatment early in the morning, so I came to ask my master to comment on my homework.

Xiao Qingwu endured it for a long time, and finally couldn't bear it anymore and picked up the endless rubbing of her chest, took out a volume of manuscripts, and said carefully: Please give me advice...

Xue Mu was shocked: So many!

Ten or eighteen, I wrote eighteen episodes.

... Xue Muru looked at the heavens: Don’t you know that you can act eighteen kinds of appearances in one game?

Xiao Qingwu was confused: Ah?

Xue Mu taught with regret: Let’s talk about the eighteen-like appearances and thirty-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-something is just a saying. As long as the general appearance is written well, that is the essence.Why do you want to write eighteen types?

Xiao Qingwu listened to the training dejectedly and recorded his homework secretly.

Xue Mu was hugging Liu Wanxi to read the manuscript together. Although he was so sorry for his words, he was actually very happy. It was so interesting to see the little yellow article written by this timid doctor fairy.

The text is pretty good, but the scene structure is not well written, and there is no feeling of being immersive for just a few strokes, and it is a little rigid and rigid.There is no way to do this, you need to practice...

Then, the description of that matter was particularly interesting, filled with serious medical terms, no character expressions or verbal communication, stereotyped posture movement, and even evaluated which postures are easier to get pregnant.

Nothing to do anything...

As he looked, a word suddenly flashed through Xue Mu's mind:

Physiological and hygiene textbooks!

Wanxi, did you react after seeing it?

No, no...

The reader did not respond, and this was the failed text.Xue Mu sighed, and folded it upright and handed it back: You keep it yourself, and you can re-read it in the future, so you can refer to it and make progress.

This sentence has the meaning of real teaching. Xiao Qingwutong red face and put it seriously, and whispered: Please give me some advice.

Whether it is such a scene or a regular scene, the story must be interesting first.For example, if there is a grape trellis in this scene, this is a unique interesting point. If you don’t play it out, just talk about how to move under the grape trellis. Wouldn’t that be a waste?

Xiao Qingwu nodded as if he had some understanding, and said: How to use Ah in combination, the disciple couldn't think of Ah.

Xiao Ye said: Dad, please write an article for my junior sister, don’t keep making things difficult for my junior sister.

You little thing.Xue Mu was so amused and cried. After thinking about it, he felt a little itchy. He hadn't written a little Huang article for a long time. This is still a classic scene, and it should be used as a Water Margin series!

He did it as soon as he said that, Xue Mu directly hugged Liu Wanxi and spread out a roll of paper to start writing a model essay.

Liu Wanxi stopped reading the memorials, and Xiao Qingwu and Ye Guying came over there, and they stretched their heads to watch the literary masters of a generation.

Without taking a look, Ye couldn't stand it first and ran away with his eyes covering his eyes. Not long after, Ye Guying turned around and left silently.

Only Xiao Qingwu was left with a blushing face, looking at him with shame and admiration, wanting to leave and wanting to learn.

Liu Wanxi in her arms had long been a puddle of mud.

"Pan Jinlian Hanging the Grape Rack Upside Down", this classic scene can be immortal... How can people from other worlds have seen it?

What big white legs are spread out and hung on the grape trellis on both sides, and they must be described in a very detailed manner, like a golden dragon exploring its claws, a red groove and a red dew...

Imagine that kind of desolate scene, where Ye was defeated directly.

Ye Guying retreated from Ximen Qing and took the plum to throw it into the pot, and the three hairs hit the bull's eye...

Liu Wanxi was so limp that she put the plums in...

When Xiao Qingwu was picked out and eaten, his face had turned into a burning cloud.

As for what I did later, I thought it was interesting, and I was more sophisticated than Xiao Qingwu's physiological and hygiene textbooks.

Xue Mu threw the pen and waved his hand happily: Take it back and make a sample essay, and think carefully.

The air was very quiet. After several breaths, Xiao Qingwu took the manuscript in a rustle. He didn't dare to look at it again, and quickly stuffed it into a small medicine bag.

Xue Mu leaned comfortably on the chair: Qingwu, your little schoolbag is very cute...

Thank you Master for your advice, Qingwu went back to figure it out.

Xiao Qingwu could no longer hear what Xue Mu was saying, so he barely bowed and fled in panic.

When I arrived at the door, I was almost hooked by the threshold. I didn't have time to scream in pain after I got to the door. I ran away with tears in my arms.

Uh...had you put too hard?

Liu Wanxi laughed: If you take someone as your apprentice, you can teach you some real kung fu. This is too much fun...

To reason this sample is what they ask for.Cough cough... Although this article is particularly amazing... Xue Mu scratched his head: I'd better teach her something else next time, it's really not good.

Liu Wanxi murmured with silky eyes: Who have you ever played with such a powerful scene?

No Ah, not me, don't talk nonsense...

Liu Wanxi twisted gently, and her cherry lips brushed across his cheeks, and the sound was like a mosquito: Do ​​you want to... play with Wanxi like this?

Xue Mu was moved and coughed dryly and covered up: Forget it, this is not good.Pan Jinlian is so playful...

When I asked you to drink half a cup of tea, am I just Pan Jinlian... Liu Wanxi smiled and said nothing more, just said: Okay, I have to deal with the memorial and deal with Ji Qingyuan later.We... have a long way to go.

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Liu Wanxi wants to do serious things, not only to deal with Ji Qingyuan, but also to learn how to deal with government affairs by herself. This is a big deal, not a time to play.

Although Xue Mu was itchy by her statute, he did not continue to disturb her. He got up and went out to carry Xiao Ye, greeted Ye Guying, and ran to Xiao Qingwu's palace courtyard, intending to teach her some serious compensation.

Along the way, there were palace maids leading the way, and they also dragged their children and daughters, and they really regarded the inner palace as the back garden.

Dad is so naughty.

The leader is a pervert.

These are the words that the two girls of two big and small have repeatedly recited and repeated along the way, all of which turned into Xianglin Sao and chatted endlessly, without any other new meanings. It seems that I really don’t know how to describe it.

Xue Mu lowered his head and was squirting without saying a word. It seemed that the grape trellis had caused public anger besides Liu Wanxi, or it would be better to be honest and not to resist. To teach others a little serious, this image can at least be saved...

Xiao Qingwu's single-yard residence has a great origin, which was the residence of Xiahou Di in the palace back then.

Secluded and quiet, with a few plum blossoms in the courtyard, the environment is very suitable for the taste of Xiaoqingwu.

There are also palace maids who take care of their diet and daily life. If they follow her habits, if they don’t want to treat Ji Qingyuan, they can stay in there for the rest of their lives.

When Xue Mu visited, Xiao Qingwu's face was red and not yet faded.She couldn't see Ye Guying. When she saw Xue Mu bringing Ye, she was not scared to close the door, but just bowed weakly: Master...

Well, the sample essay I just didn’t think well and tried a little too hard. I apologize to you.

Xiao Qingwu was stunned for a moment, and shook his head instead and said: Master, this article is very good, and I have learned a lot.

Xue Mu was stunned: What did you learn?

Only when the scenes and actions, language and expressions are combined together can they become vivid and come alive, instead of just giving a stereotyped explanation of what you think.As for those who are lustful but superficial, Qingwu learned the way of writing. How to describe sexual intercourse and how to describe military affairs are actually common.

Xue Mu looked at her in a daze. He knew that the genius had already shown his strength. Even if Xue Mu was not in the world, Xiao Qingwu would sooner or later shine brightly.

He took a deep breath and said seriously: Last time I talked about the three elements of the novel, so let’s talk about the structure and foreshadowing today...

As the head of an entertainment company, Xue Mu often did some internal training lectures before traveling through time. He is not unfamiliar with the job of being a guest teacher, but he has never taught classes in both planes as much as he is today.