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It is not the original intention to finish it in such a hasty situation, because various reasons stopped in the middle of the road for more than half a year, which has suffocated a lot of writing passion.

I am not a person with perseverance and I am very sorry!

But finally keeping your promise, I don't know how to keep my promise

The mediocre part is pretty good. I deliberately created some contradictions and conflicts between each character in order to make the mediocre part more abundantly read.

There are five female protagonists in this article: Yang Yueling, Xiao Yiting, Yang Xuelan, Wei Xiaoran and chye, but none of them are perfect.

Yang Yueling is too weak and cries at any time, as if anyone can bully her

Xiao Yiting has stinking feet (laughs). This girl seems to be as weak as her mother, but in fact she is soft on the outside and strong on the inside

Yang Xuelan is selfish and jealous, and is far from the image of a female policewoman in many H articles, and lacks the principle and perseverance he deserves

Wei Xiaoran is greedy for vanity, and her step by step decline is a bit sad, but in reality, which of those girls who are wandering around are lustful and indulgent at the beginning!

As for chye, I won't say much. Interested friends can ggle it by themselves

The biggest failure of this article is to forcibly compress a long article into a novella. The main line cuts and deletes are basically reduced to a pistol article

Originally, it was a two-leading protagonist, regardless of the primary or secondary. The title "My Mother and Daughter Flower" was also later changed.

The character Fatty actually has a lot of room for shaping, such as rape, rape, heavy-mouthed training, etc.

In the initial setting, the mature twin sisters and Liu Shuang both exist as heroines. Gong Yunsonglu's mother-daughter flower section was also skipped at the readers' request.

Yan Long, the big Bss, became a supporting role, and some of the foreshadowings laid before were useless. Now it's a pity

Anyway, the plot is simply a mess

Here is an explanation, this article involves incest

Xiao Yiting and Zhang Han are half-siblings, which is obvious

Although the article does not state it, there have been more than ten hints, which also corresponds to the fate of serving many generations.

As for the incest of Gong Yunsong and Qin Wenjing, it is clearer.

Although I haven't responded many times, I still have to thank all the friends who follow and support this article! I'm not sure if "Marrying Mother" will be updated. If someone wants to continue, it's also excellent